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Reviews for Comrades in Arms

By : JadeHeart
  • From ANON - eien_kiseki on October 27, 2007
    OMG! This is such a amazing fanfic! I love it! Throughout the whole storytelling you kept things descriptive, but not overdoing the descriptions to make it boring. The story of Conrad and Yozak is beautifully told from both character's perspective, and i love how you mingled in their thoughts from different times in the story to give the audience the full force of the emotions Conrad and Yozak feel for each other! My favorite is the love scene near the end of the fanfiction back when Conrad first discovered that Julia has died! OMG! That scene was so beautiful and heart breaking! It kept me on the suspense the whole time, and it was only until the fanfiction ended was i able to take a deep breath and let out all the air i've been holding in my chest.

    I really have to say that your fanfiction is my favorite KKM fanfiction ever! I really love it, every single part of it. It carries so much depth and emotion, and during times in the fanfic i almost felt like the characters themselves were alive. *sigh* too bad you ended this fanfic with nothing resolved. Maybe you can write a sequel entailing what happens after Conrad comes back to Yuuri's side and how Yozak and Conrad express their feelings for each other? I hope you do because this fanfic is too good to be left as a stand along one-shot, it deserves some good sequels and explanations! So please, please write a sequel! I'll be waiting!
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  • From Daxemon on August 11, 2007
    Jade, because of you I had to see what this Kyo Kara Maoh was about, so that I could read this fic with some semblance of understanding of the story behind it. I loved the anime and I adore this fic. It is beyond sweet and the pairing of Yosak and Conrad was a perfect choice. Gravitation, FAKE, and now Kyo Kara Maoh, all so well written. I read them over and over again and not matter how many times I still react the same, that is how intense your writing is. I will always be a fan of your talent. Thank you for blessing the fanfic universe of all you choose to write about, you bring intensity. Thanks.
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  • From Tlynn on June 16, 2007
    Oh sweetie, you do angst so well! And if I wasn't still waiting for you to fix the lives of some of your other characters I would INSIST you fix things for Jozak and Conrart. Very well done. And you have me trying to think up peole to slap some sense into these boys once they are reunited. Conrarts mother comes to mind..... Or even Wolfram - Saying something like, "Why don't you just sleep with my brother already."

    Of couse I still waiting for you fix things for a Shuichi Shindou as well.

    Ah, sweet torture.

    T
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