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Reviews for Androgenus Evangelion

By : Shinji
  • From Henryjamesthefith on October 23, 2011
    ... You astound me! Such a perfect preface for a story. And yet....

    You just let this one die. Be honest! And so I have a request;
    Would you allow me to use this preface to add depth to one of my own? I swear I won't use it if you say no! Pretty Please with sugerlumps on top?
    ... sorry for being nosy... I'll shut up now XD

    Yours sincerely
    Henryjamesthefifth
    (eagerly awaiting a reply, hint hint ;)
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  • From Stormraven on February 03, 2009
    I really like the intro to the story, you leave a lot open for plot purposes. Nice writing style, solid spelling/punctuation. I do hope you continue, even though the story hasn't been touched in a couple years. If it's 'dead in the water' to you, maybe put it up for adoptions with whatever notes you had?
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  • From on October 13, 2008
    i loved he incredible amount of detail, its a shame there are no other chapter's though I was really looking forward to how Shinji being Androgenus would play out
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  • From on September 06, 2008
    I love it so far i wish i could read more i was only disappointed that this was the only chapter
    only thing i can think of to improve it is make it wee bit more detailed
    love it
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  • From Raelax12222 on October 01, 2007
    i really love the preface id like to see what this story could evolve to. Raelax
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  • From LordSaturn on September 07, 2007
    This has to be the weirdest thing that I have ever read!

    I’m willing to stick with it for a few chapters to see how it turns out.

    One thing that I noticed, is that your formatting needs more spaces where appropriate. I have noticed this problem with other stories and am beginning to wonder if it has something to do with the site editor. What I have done is save the document as HTML. It still looks a little weird but at least my formatting doesn’t get blown away.

    Dale (AKA 94saturn)

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  • From Neferius on July 15, 2007
    Well it's unique. Hell, it seems to have a plot...which is rare for this site. I guess since Shinji is a androgyne that that means that Rei is too. I wonder what other changes are in store. I look forward to this Mr. Ikari.
    Read ya Later.
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  • From SierraM on June 23, 2007
    Interesting concept. Should be fun to see what happens to Shinji. I hope you bring Rei in this story somehow. Looking forward to more.
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  • From supadm on June 18, 2007
    Awesome start. Keep up the good work.

    Supreme Admiral of the Web
    AFF.net Commanding
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