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Reviews for Changing Fate Series 3: The Legend Reborn

By : ctsama

From ANON - Chaz on May 05, 2008
I just wanted to let you know that I think you're a genius. I just sat here and read straight through all three parts of this, and loved each one. Thank you for writing them!
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From ANON - Mibugirl12 on September 02, 2007
This whole series was fantastic! It was extremely well written and kept the readers attention the whole way through. The caracture interaction that you did was right on with the way they interact in the anime and made sure that, even though this isn't actually what happens in the anime, the reader was still immersed in the same world. I LOVED the relationship between Tasuki and Tamahome. And I always thought that Tamahome was a bit too much for Miaka to handle, even if she didn't realize it. I really do hope you continue on with this story. I would really like to see what happens with Tama and Tas after all of this. And the thought of Tamahome and Koji having to tolerate eachother for Tasuki's sake is appealing. Not to mention how Koji will react to Tamahome getting Tasuki pregnant, or Tasuki's reaction when he finds out it's Miaka who made it all possible. Again, great story! Cookies for you!
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From Kuragari75 on August 23, 2007
OMG! GOMEN NE!!! Sorry to just have dropped of the face of the planet on you. I don't know how I missed your updates... but it went from chapter one to 11 on me and I feel bad for missing giving input. Oh well, can't be helped. Anyway, I loved this story... the whole series was an incredible read and I'll probably read them several times more. I love Mitskake's comment of 'you two are perfect for eachother, you're overprotective and he's rediculously self-sacrificing.' lol that made me smile... aw hell the whole thing makes me smile. It's so well written and Tama and Tasuki couldn't be cuter. Oh, one more thing. THAT BASTARD NAKAGO FINALLY BIT THE DUST!!!! WOOHOO!!! I never liked him... can ya tell? ;) well, I'll be keeping an eye out for anymore stories from you because I loved this series and want more. A pregnant Tasuki huh? lol, he's not gonna like that... even if Tamahome does. ooooohhhh, and with the bond you think Tas would make Tama feel the childbirth too? sounds like somethin' he'd pull. wow, this is the longest review I've ever written... anyway, WELL DONE!!!! LOVED IT!!!
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From ANON - anon. on August 09, 2007
awww! that was positively adorable! i thought miaka was going to wish tasuki to be a girl! now that would be funny! i loved your story from the beginning. like i said earlier, perfect balance of angst and sweetness! you're quite a talented writer and i look forward in reading your next fics!
good luck, regards and hugs,
me! (^_^)v
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From tasukigirl78 on August 08, 2007
Wow what a great way to end the series. I love that Tasuki loved Tamahome being so romantic. LOL at Tasuki being in a drsss, although I am sure it will be a very nice wedding without Tokaki's help. If Suzaku has the sense of humor that we all know he does, Tasuki would get pregnant with twin one girl and one boy(that way he wouldn't got too insane but am giggling at the thought of him carrying two children at one). I love this story so much. I sure do hope you indeed continue it one day. I would love to see how older brother Kouji reacts to his little brother's finace (I am giggling at that thought as well.
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From Bulma on August 08, 2007
Much love to you for writing such a funny, romantic, and sensual story. I'm glad to be able to make you grin like an idiot just by being honest in my opinion of your masterpiece. This ending was perfect. Tamahome's proposal was beautifully done. The fireworks, the romantic atmosphere, the rings (though it never said if Tasuki put the ring on or not) and the mushy reaction once Tasuki knew what the rings were for was aboslutely superb. I look forward to another installment of this world. Soi and Tomo's revenge on Tasuki whilst he's pregnant would be quite a challenge to pull off, but with your abilities as an author, I'm sure you'd have no trouble making it a fantastic read and an interesting tale.

Congratulations on finishing a series as complex, yet simplistic as this one with as much grace and insight as you have. Yours are truly works of art. Best of luck (though you hardly need it ~_^) on your next fiction writing endevors, and you can be sure I'll be right there to read and become lost in the fantasy world that you so eloquently depict. Cheers. Love, Nikki-kun
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From tasukigirl78 on August 02, 2007
Another great chapter! I love the Chirko/Tasuki friendship/brother ship you have created. It makes me want to see him with kids of his own. You know he would be a great father. I am glad to see more Tasuki/Tamahome hotness. I am going to be sad to see this fic end but at least it will be here to re-read. Can't wait to see what Miaka comes up with to wish for. ALso as for you Mitskuake comment...I have never actually seen that pairing...I think Tasuki/Mits would be at little weird to read.
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From Bulma on August 02, 2007
I'm loved. You're loved. We all love this fanfic... There's so much love that I think I'm going to cry. This is such a fantastic fic, the chapters show how much thought you put into each character. Chichiri is dead on. Chiriko, while usually protrayed as a glorified filler, has an actual personality and a deep seated love for his bandit big-brother. Nuriko and Tasuki's interraction shows that you have a good grasp on their relationship; they love each other, but its one of those loves that is so playful that it isn't really seen for what it is. That you saw and showed us their quirky relationship, tells me that you know exactly who you are writing.

You've done a fantastic job in transforming this fiction from a one-shot into an action-packed, dramatic, romantic, comedy that has real feeling behind it. My hat's off to you. I adore your writing. I will sorely miss reading new chapters for this piece, but I've saved it on my hard drive, added it to my favotrites list, and am attempting to put it up on my site. You're an amazing author, I know that the next work of text art that you create will be as much of a masterpiece as this one, if not greater. Beautiful job. Love, Nikki-kun
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From Bulma on July 30, 2007
I love you. *hugs* Tamahome got to 'ride the pony'. *feels like a dork for saying that* And it's good that Tasuki finally let Tamahome inside his head and showed the poor boy what darkness was living in there. I feel so bad for my bandit-boi, he should never feel dirty. *hugs hm*

Beautiful chapter--even though I'm uber late in reviewing ^^;-- and I can not wait for more. Anou... what is this mention of things being 'born'? >.>... Boys don't have babies.... or do they in your FY version world? That would kick ass... strange as hell, but it would be pretty cool if Suzaku granted them a way to have some babies.... >3 Love!!! Nikki-kun
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From tasukigirl78 on July 28, 2007
Another great chapter. AFter that hot boy loving I need to take a shower. As for Mitsukake, he seems like a wonderful older brother that Tasuki can talk to. Anyway can't wait to read more and find out what theat secret plot is.
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From ANON - anon. on July 28, 2007
another great chappie(s)! loved reading it! i shall be waiting for the next chappie! till then i wish you luck in your work(s)!
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From Bulma on July 24, 2007
YATTA! Even while unconcious, Tasuki still saves the day. ^-^ Why he would want to do a foolish thing like agree to let Tomo and Soi live, I'll never know, but at least he spoke. We're going to have to do something drastic to get these pesky nightmares to go away and get Tasuki to realize that Tamahome is bonkers without him. Maybe we need to promise him that Nakago is worm food and that he never got to actually finish what he... did Nakago actually "start" anything other than touching him? Like other than fingers inside? It's so vague that I'm not sure. ^^;

If so... *sharpens butcher's knife* I have a treat for our dead Nakago. I'm going to revive him and cut his peepee off and feed it to him then kill him again. XD But, seriously, I fall more and more in love with this story line with each new chapter. I've gotten to the point of checking for new chapters everyday. I'm hooked, I admit it. ^-^

Keep up the fantastic work! I can't wait for more, but I shutter to think that the end is coming. I wanna know what happens in the end but I don't want it to end. Does that make sense? XD More soon, please!
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From tasukigirl78 on July 24, 2007
There needs to be some Tama/Tasuki TLC after this, the poor bandit needs it after everything he's been through. Go Chiriko and Hotohori, they rock. Great chapter can't wait to see what you do with this story.
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From ANON - anon on July 22, 2007
that was a really nice fic! i really like it, it was so sweet and gentle yet rough and angsty! nice combination of both! i havent read a fic like dat in a while. hope u continue and best wishes! (^_^)v
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From tasukigirl78 on July 22, 2007
Poor Tasuki :0 I am glad Nakago fried for what he did to him. Great chapter can't wait to read the next one.
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