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Reviews for Broken Only to Heal Again

By : tshapochi
  • From Travellyr on December 21, 2007
    *giggling* Aw, so cute. Poor Teki is easy to upset (but then, uprooted children are), but wow, the Straw Hats are just all so adorable- Usopp and Chopper performing the time-old "HE DID IT" routine. Sadly, Teki is ignorant of the proper response- not to cry, but to go "NO HE DID IT" and point back! Na, I'm certain the dork trio will teach him. ^-^
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  • From ravensfrost on November 16, 2007
    This is continuing beautifully and I can't wait for more (i'm an impatiant person sorry). I bet Chopper's gonna give zoro all hell when he realises zoro just stubbornly pulled the anchor up even with his injuries.
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  • From Gingerbread on October 26, 2007
    OH Gomen Gomen Gomen! I havent review because life is just bloody peachy with me, Ive been so damn busy. Gomen nasai.

    But here I am. I loved the last chapter so much. Finally a kiss between Luffy and Nami! I melted when Sanji wonder if Zoro ever looked like a cute little boy *so sweet*. And just as Nami and Robin I was terrified of that scene where Sanji lost control and kicked Tajimaru. I remember a scene in one of the OP special where Chopper runs for his life and a little boy wants to hugh him and play with him as a toy, I found that so hilarious, poor Chopper, but I have to agree I would do the same thing if I met him... Finally the crew is almost complete. We still need Zoro, but things really went to the right pace and to the right place in this fic. I adore it.

    Thanks for sharing it. :p
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  • From ravensfrost on October 24, 2007
    yay new chapters new chapters. If I remember rightly I've already told you how much I'm enjoying this story and given that the enjoyment hasn't waned in the slightest I thought I would try to encourage updates cause i'm greedy about things I like and want more. Please Please Please update again soon. Sanji a little slow on the uptake there hehe. I loved Luffy's comment on having two zoro's. It just felt so umm Luffy like
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  • From Travellyr on October 18, 2007
    *laughing*
    Oh, excellent, excellent last line. The Sergeant's thinking he could escape from Chopper... FAIL. I hope they dump him into the sea when they leave. It'd wash him off some.

    You still have a great setup, things we want to know- Luffy and Nami, Sanji and Zoro and each other, Muteki's mother, his granfather's secret, the mystery Marine, etc, etc... ^^ I look forward to seeing what you do. Thank you for continuing to share!
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  • From AletaRois on October 17, 2007
    I personally think that this story is very well written. I'd also like to express my joy that you have straight pairings in this fanfic, since it seems like there are far too many yaoi and yuri (though mostly yaoi) for One Piece. Not that I have anything against them... they just aren't my thing.
    Keep up the good work and update as often as possible!
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  • From ANON - Kaiba and Joey on October 14, 2007
    First off let me say that I liked your Story. It was an interesting twist and i was begining to enjoy where it was going...but the end of chapter 3 ruined it for me. Me being a writer myself i can understand that you want people to praise your art work and to give you advise on how you can improve...but i don't think authors should make people review there stories. Because then you don't get really feed back. you just get reviews that say "Please update!" or "I love this story!". That doesn't really help you with your skill, just your ego. Being an author means that you write stories so people can enjoy them, even if they don't review. That's all i really have to say and i'm not doing this to piss you off. I write this to every author...because i was one of those reviewers and it doesn't help. I don't like when i get reviews like that. because there is always a way to improve...and those review just don't. Thanks for reading this. If you want to complain i did leave my emial so feel free to write me. I'll listen.
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  • From Travellyr on September 27, 2007
    This is so much fun- it's really a delightful read, and a great way to pass the time. Thank you so much for sharing!
    Luffy and Usopp and CHOPPER make me laugh (hooray Dork Trio!), Robin is always a favorite of mine when she's done well (and here she is), Nami is sweet (when she isn't a witch :3) and Sanji and Zoro provide the angst. *shrugs*
    Saa, it seems to be their lot in life... comic relief (EVERY Straw Hat is comic relief, and there's no escaping it), angst, a little exposition. Hee. And Muteki is a good OC, not obnoxious.
    Well, he's obnoxious because he's a little kid, not because he's THERE. :3
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2007
    yay a new chapter. I don't usually review every single chapter but I fear you stopping such a good story. hence I don't really know what to say as my last review covereed it pretty well. umm umm keep writing pretty please?
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  • From ANON - random person on September 24, 2007
    gah! That was so great i love how this story is going! :) hope you update again soon! Luffy is just too funny...
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2007
    poor poor zoro. please keep writing. I rarely review unless the story caught my interest so if you stop now I'll get bored and my brain will attempt to fill in the rest and it won't be one tenth as good as yours so please please please don't stop now. I'm gonna go check if you write anything else bye bye
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  • From ANON - random person on September 20, 2007
    ok i forgot to say this last time, but the luffyxzoro kiss just pwned my mind in the greatest way! X3 well anyways can't wait for the next chpt. and multi-chapters would be great but i hope they dont take to long this story is really good :(
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  • From Gingerbread on September 18, 2007
    The kiss between Zoro and Luffy was so HOT!!!!! *im a perv, i know*

    And THE PHRASE of this chap was: “Why does Mr. Pee-pee grow when you rub on it?”

    LOL I even cried out laughing. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - random person on September 18, 2007
    omfg that was orgasmic! @.@ that was so funny, poor zoro.. lol i can't wait for the next chapter! update soon please!
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  • From darkchaos on September 17, 2007
    *cheers*brilliant! i can't wait 4 more
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