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Reviews for Red Lust

By : Bewinha
  • From GoddessBella on October 21, 2008
    I love Rei too!!! I just wish there were more positive fics about her out there. I hate fics that demean her, especially those ever faithful Rei/Raye betrays Usagi/Serena. Makes my blood boil. Anyway good job.
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  • From ANON - sexy seren on July 27, 2007
    update it soon
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  • From ANON - lainofthewired on July 20, 2007
    Good and sexy, but you need a beta-reader to correct your spelling and grammar. It's "ecstasy" BTW.
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  • From Bewinha on July 15, 2007
    Tank you for reviewing and sorry about the grammar. I'm portuguese so my english isn't the best but I apreciated the constructive remarks.
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  • From ANON - Spin on July 14, 2007
    Without meaning to be a grammar nazi, you need to use speech marks.
    "Hello." said the person.
    "Hi. Can I help you?"
    "Just wondering how you are."
    "Not bad," came the reply, "pity about these grammar nazis."

    That aside, I really liked this story, and your writing style in general. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
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