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Reviews for Heartbreaker

By : antilogicgirl
  • From ANON - Fatal Mars on February 28, 2012
    That was all sorts of wonderful. You are killing it for sure. This story blew my mind. I really was not expecting the story line and the lines you were writing, but you have me and I cried out in pain when I noticed there wasn't another chapter. It is so rare to read something and just fall in love with it instantly and keep it. Its so easy to fall, but keeping the love throughout where your panting for more is a gift and you fucking have it!
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  • From jordash00 on August 11, 2008
    O come on! I've been following this fic on fanfiction since you started it! When I went to check your profile there I saw Lady sings the blues and almost fainted. I never put it together that you were the same person so of course I flew here to see if this fic was finished. I love this fic! I hope you do finish it!
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  • From ANON - Carmen on December 10, 2007
    No more Kou-chan?! Damn... and I was starting to really like this whole Sanzo/female!Gojyo/Kougaiji love triangle thing. It's different, and I like different. Haha, just keep up the good work! I'll be looking forward to the next chappie!
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  • From Robyn on December 06, 2007
    *pokes* I've been wondering when this will be updated. I hope you are okay.
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  • From ANON - Blue on September 15, 2007
    chapter five was awesome XD
    did Kou see Gojyo and Sanzo, I wonder....hmmmm
    this isn't the last of Kou....now i bet he is really going to
    screw with Gojyo because he can't have her. i bet he'll screw with
    Sanzo too, more than usual. :P

    That was so cute with Hakkai he reminded me of a
    worried little mother, lol. I'm going to re-read this fic
    YAY...and hopefully I'll see a few new chapters soon.

    Jolly Good Read!

    --Blue ^^
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  • From Robyn on September 13, 2007
    YAY!!!! OMG, despite how long this chapter was, it kept my attention actively. Lots of wonderful points of view to read, giving us better ideas about what the characters are thinking, and why they are making some of the actions and decisions they are.

    That was a very dangerous game for Gojyo to have played with Kou. I hope it doesn't come back to haunt her.

    The dance between Sanzo and Gojyo was intense. :) Wonderful.


    But Hakkai's thoughts/feelings as Gojyo was leaving have me verrrrry concerned. EEP!
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  • From Dragon7 on September 13, 2007
    Loved it no you did not screw it up at all. I can't wait to read more so update soon.
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  • From Robyn on August 12, 2007
    :( *pokes* Got spoiled with the quick updates.
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  • From CryptJo on July 27, 2007
    At first, when I read the summary, I wasn't sure about this fic but I'm really glad I read it! It's actually really good - and very entertaining! Well written too. :D

    Enjoying this a lot - I do hope there's more!
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  • From vampslyr on July 21, 2007
    A talk with the the Talking Heads wasn't what I was expecting from Hakkai, but they seem to have given Sanzo's ass an effective reaming (figuratively of course). Kanzeon knows how to drive home the real point though. The bath tub scene was very nice and we've cleared up that the two have been attracted to each other for a while. Unfortunately, Sanzo still hasn't apologized and it looks like it's going to take another outside force to kick Sanzo's ass in gear. Gotta love Goku though, he is very sweet.
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  • From Dragon7 on July 20, 2007
    I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON...................


    P.S. Love the chapter
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  • From Robyn on July 19, 2007
    GAH! The ANGST! :P

    I really was hoping for Hakkai to beat the crap out of Sanzo...then maybe take him to see the aspects. :P

    Excellent chapter as usual! I am so glad I started reading this story.
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  • From ANON - gen50 on July 19, 2007
    hakkai was in character - BUT - and this is just my opinion -
    he isnt the sort who would hold his anger and force sanzo to go see the floating heads

    he would have clobbered sanzo but not killed him. he owes sanzo his life
    this is assuming all the events in the anime/manga hold

    as for kanzeon, looking at canon, she has always been after sanzo to show life
    he was bored in heaven and terribly repressed on earth
    and well, his main objective was stopping the resurrection of gyumaoh -
    and whatever else develop didnt really matter.
    i'm just saying sanzo wouldnt have gotten a slap from her or the floating heads
    they would probably focus on the objective they gave him
    and this is something i dont remember, how far where they went all this happened
    you might have established this in the a/n or the first chapter - but i cant remember
    so it would have been difficult and a little foolhardy for hakkai to go back
    surely they had traveled a long way already

    sanzo would have been lectured by hakkai... as he was getting beat up
    everyone agrees - an angry hakkai - is a dangerous hakkai.
    sanzo knows that.

    i didnt know this was going to be a sanzo-gojyo story.
    (i have a strong 393 preference)
    and well, sanzo attracted to gojyo - male or female - is something i dont see
    although clearly gojyo is the opposite of sanzo, and there is a saying that opposites attract. so it can happen

    but i can see a gojyo attraction to sanzo - sanzo has a beautiful face,
    and gojyo, being himself - cant help but be attracted to beautiful faces
    male or female. i think he does fully appreciate the human body.
    however, going by the anime/manga - i think he does want love - the kind that stays
    it is not articulated, but it is there.

    so i have some difficulty accepting the premise.
    but assuming he does attempt rape - and well, gojyo's provoked sanzo a lot
    but it doesnt excuse the attempt
    and hakkai is sensitive about rape, it being tied up with kanan
    (again, if canon holds in your story)

    aside from those 3 objections (hakkai going to the floating heads, and the slap on sanzo from the meeting,and that they were able to return - surely they had gone a long way already - otherwise, sanzo may have asked for a gojyo replacement when that happened), your story unfolds as it should -

    hakkai "warning" sanzo, and sanzo has to apologize (i agree with that)

    as for the sanzo attraction to gojyo - all i can say is - it is possible.

    as for other details
    goku - sweet as he is - would never let hakkai beat up sanzo - sanzo is his sun
    i wonder if this is why you had hakkai march up to the floating heads
    but i dont think that march back would have been possible as i have said earlier
    and hakkai's rage would have required a physical outlet - which is why i think he would have hit sanzo (even just once)

    btw. i quite enjoy the music you've been mentioning. they're oldies but goodies
    as the expression says. ella fritzgerald has a wonderful voice. you are the rare author(ess) who quotes oldies in the music. more often than not i read music by new bands/singers so your music quotes are refreshingly classic without being highbrow.
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  • From fangirlqueen on July 19, 2007
    ohh dancing! Hakkai naked and wet dancing? pleaseeeeeeeee lol
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  • From ANON - gen50 on July 19, 2007
    interesting fic you have.
    you're having gojyo behave in a manner i would expect if such a thing happened to him

    the kou chapter might have been hot.
    as for sanzo, i'm not sure how chivalry would appear with his makeup, but i would expect koumyou to be so,
    so sanzo might be so.

    hakkai's reaction in chapter 3 is spot on. except that he probably wont really kill sanzo
    and i like goku being sweet. i think he is.
    more?
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