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By : YoukaiChoGonou
  • From Tencha on March 10, 2011
    pokes
    You still alive there?
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  • From SuchACalamity on October 04, 2008
    Oh good, he punched him! =D

    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Robyn on June 16, 2008
    Sorry! Late!!! I haven't been visiting this part of AFF as much as it seemed it wasn't updating.

    Any way...the angst continues, but I am glad Hakkai and Gojyo have managed to get something going between them. Now, if only Hakkai would trust Gojyo enough to tell him what's been going on. I'd hate to see them get to the 'interesting' part in their relationship only to have Hakkai freeze up solid.
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  • From meng13 on June 12, 2008
    thought I'd drop a line to tell you I'm really enjoying your story. I just started reading it today and I finished all the chapters in one sitting. Keep it up I can't wait to see whats going to happen next. :-)
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  • From YoukaiHakkai on June 11, 2008
    yay! This got updated! I love this one!!! I haven't reviewed before, I don't think. But I've read it! A couple times, actually. So I was happy to see it updated!!

    Great work. Seriously. I think the concept is great; Banri is a perfect excuse to abuse Hakkai. ^_^ I applaud you.
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  • From orvida on June 11, 2008
    wow hot dam that was intense poor hakkai good for him i hope he rips barni's spleen out of his back first he assaults him then lyes to goyjo and next he rapes him.
    he should unleash his yoakai on his ass.
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  • From Mikkigg on November 17, 2007
    This is so good...I am so happy I started reading this. I hope Gojyo and Hakkai finally find some peace...together. I love this pairing. I look forward to more great chapters. Good luck and hurry(I am not patient...sorry)!
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  • From solitare1 on September 27, 2007
    I hope you are still writing this. It's a really good story.
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  • From solitare1 on September 25, 2007
    OMG where is the rest??!? You have me hooked now!
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  • From vbruce on September 12, 2007
    Poor Hakkai! Gojyo had better remove a certain youkai's entrails slowly after he finds out. Or better yet, have Hakkai do it once he's healed.
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  • From Trinity on September 09, 2007
    Hey
    i just wanted to say how much i am enjoying the story so far. I love the tenderness between Gojyo and Hakkai even if it isn't physical. The chapters may be a little short but i don't mind that, in fact i like that. It means the story is more to the point without any of that meaningless dialogue that often get's thrown around. I write yaoi for saiyuki though i've only got one posted on here called Raw Sugar. Mine never manages to show a bond or a relationship between characters and it's often brutal and to the point. i think it's because i like to save tha depth and angst for my non-yaoi pieces. It would probably explain why most of my yaoi tends to be on the dark side or unemotional. Its so refreshing to read a piece that can keep the darkness and yet still have the emotion. I've been thinking quite a lot about trying to accomplish the same thing but as of yet i can't think of a good enough story to go with it. I'm a Sanzo girl though so i know he'll be featured in it strongly that's for sure! hehe! I think the best thing about this piece is even if you do decide to take the boys relationship that step further, it'll will make perfect sense and not a love born from thin air! I'm looking forward to reading your other chapters and will definatly be keeping an eye for anymore works from you!

    Latreia x
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  • From SuchACalamity on August 06, 2007
    “I-I… I’m sorry… your sheets are stained. I’m sorry…”
    Typical Hakkai... apologizing for everything.

    OHHHHH, poor Hakkai.

    Great story, can't wait for the next chapter.


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  • From KansouAme on August 01, 2007
    Sooo.... is Gojyo going to protect Hakkai or will Hakkai snap?? Should be interesting.
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  • From Robyn on August 01, 2007
    Well, Gojyo did find out something happened. Hakkia REALLY isn't in his right mind (not that I blame him) if he thought the 'no one' answer was going to work.

    I hope Gojyo has a lot of patience with Hakkai...he's going to need it.
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  • From Robyn on July 27, 2007
    Ah, that's a very interesting mind twist Hakkai is putting himself through, thinking this must be his punishment.

    Hopefully you update soon, because I want to see what Gojyo does when he finally figures out what's going on.
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