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Reviews for Making the Most of the Situation

By : HitomiBrighteyes
  • From ANON - Lo on March 30, 2010
    In the category listings I felt you had the most interesting story and you proved true! You did a great job with directing the scenes and making them better written than most people in any other genre by making things interesting and realistic. You had a good grasp on Ryoki, a character that actually manga wise I dislike, and used his characterization to the fullest. I actually didn't mind him as bad as I usually do. I even like that Hatsumi's mental voice was there to give her a little more backbone without throwing her out of character. When I think about it, her "voice"would be her thoughts in the manga, and you transitioned not being able to see pictures well on that note.
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  • From ANON - ronandhermy on July 11, 2009
    This is wonderful and one of the best hot gimmick stories i've read. keep it up. :)
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  • From ShouraiChan on November 26, 2008
    Awww...but how can we never speak of this again when it's such a great story?! XD Seriously, I fell IN LOVE with Hot Gimmick when a girlfriend of mine let me borrow it a few years back and I have always been like, "UGH...SHE BETTER END UP WITH RYOKI!" Then, when the last one came out and I saw the PARENTAL ADVISORY" label, I was like, "Yes! They do it!" And YES! They did! XD Seriously though, I like this story a lot! Ryoki may be a jerk, but he's a sexy jerk! Great job!
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  • From jendo on October 08, 2008
    That was really good ^_^
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  • From ANON - bree on October 06, 2008
    hot and sweet. thanx for the fun read.
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  • From ShadowStar666 on March 11, 2008
    That was beautiful. great job! one of the only hot gimmick fics I like. thank you!
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  • From ANON - sabaku_lotus on December 05, 2007
    that was....kinda hot; If I could favorite stuff off of AFF.net I would definated fav this fic.

    First time read HG fic that actually...turned me on like this *Sweatdrop* hell I want more! Ryo-san was....sexy as hell in this >_
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  • From SilkenPetal on December 03, 2007
    Is the hot gimmick series over with, because the website I go to only has up to chapter 46 and I was wondering if the series was farther than this could you give me the website address it is farther on? Love this fic by the way.
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  • From ANON - baboysai on October 27, 2007
    hi, i think that you made a very good adult themed short story out of the series. I've been reading fanfics all night and this is the only one that got my approval. Good choice of words, right pace, the characters are exactly who they were in the story. It's really good. :D
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  • From ANON - bansheeblue13 on October 01, 2007
    Wow...first lemon read in like two months...just blows me away...excellent work!
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  • From yumeitenshi on September 19, 2007
    wow I really liked that one! lol ryoki's such an adorable bastard. good job!
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  • From ANON - hrly on August 15, 2007
    I completely understand where you come from. I own just about all of the hotgimmick series except one but the last chapter of hot gimmick left the unwritten and heavily implide sex scene haunting my brain too, still does. But I am glad that I am not the only one who feels this way. If I had half the writing ability you do I would have writen a oneshot too. And for all of Ryoki's faults, he's still a sexy bastard and I am glad Hatsumi chose him because he needs all the lovin he can get!
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