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Reviews for RUMBLE!

By : TreeStar
  • From SnowxXxAngel on August 31, 2012
    I KNEW that vision was to do with the war between Shirohige and the Marines (not certain of the Japanese spelling for Marines so left it in English)!
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  • From ANON - Myrrhmaid on November 13, 2009
    Uwaaah! Such a good story! I'm so glad I stumbled across a post in a livejournal group where somebody recommended it to someone else... and I randomly started reading it and wah I want more! I can't wait to read the sequel!
    I'm very glad that Chopper's one of my least favorite characters, though, because you really trashed his reputation in this.
    I really liked that it wasn't Luffy's fault that he consumed a lethal dose of Rumbleballs, even though it's something Luffy would easily be believed to just stumble across and toss into his mouth. I can't describe why, but I liked that this whole thing wasn't his fault. And I liked how you started incorporating foreshadowing of things that happen at a later point in the official series.
    That bit about the man-eating plants and the baron and the goat though? What was that from? I've read/watched everything (except some filler) and I don't remember anything like that. Is that from one of your other fics?

    Anyway I'm sad now 'cause I spent my entire evening at home reading the last 6 or 8 chapters and now I don't have any to read tomorrow at work! *cries* Oh write more!
    Oh wait... You probably have! Write more anyway, it won't be long before I catch up ^_^
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  • From ANON - knives17 on January 23, 2009
    wow you never sease to amaze me. this story was really great. you need to keep writing. I'll be waiting on that sequel.
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  • From spoon10488 on September 16, 2008
    Awwwwe! so cute. I loved this story. Can't wait for the sequel.
    =)
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  • From ANON - YusukesLover on August 26, 2008
    Hey Treestar! I've read your stuff on Fanfiction.net but I like it better here. Anyway, this story was amazing! I can't wait to read the sequel! I hope you write it really soon! Thank you for posting this!
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  • From ultistarmon on May 28, 2008
    Wow, great story!!! When can I expect to see the sequel? I really would like to know what happens next, so please continue the story!!!
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  • From ravensfrost on January 21, 2008
    Oh oh oh wow. I'll admit i'd skipped over this story a couple of time because i thought a shrunk luffy would be meh but i have to admit this was amazing and i'm glad i finally gave it the chance it more than deserved. I'm definantly reading the next.
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  • From blackfeenix on November 03, 2007
    wow. just wow. I started reading the first chapter and just had to sit down and read all that you'd written. I LOVE it!! The characters are still so completely in character but more in depth.
    The relationship between Luffy and Zoro was just so sweet. There were so many times when I was reading that my heart would just ache. (I'm an uncureable romantic). it was great seeing the emotional side of Zoro and a deeper side to Luffy. ( because as good as One Piece is, Luffy comes off as a bit two-dimensional. still more depth than a one-dimensional character but still missing something. hopefully we'll find out more soon)
    Any way.....yes, i LOVED the story. I laughed a lot, awwww-ed lot and drooled quite a bit. ( i mean, Zoro working out. -dreamy eyed gaze- ) Luffy was just so CUTE all chibi-like. And so was Zoro taking care of Luffy! X3
    I can't wait for the ending!
    Nice job!
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  • From Nonny on October 28, 2007
    Is this it?!!!
    whta about the crew?!
    What about Zoro?!!!!!
    damn it i want more!
    please?
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  • From crazycheryl on October 18, 2007
    WoW that was amazing,I was so scared we were going to lose Loofy. I can't wait to see what happens next. I think Zoro will finally be able to tell the captain how he feel and not be stopped. It would be great if they got together.
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  • From ANON - OMG MPREG! on October 15, 2007
    NOOOOO!!!! YA CANT KILL HIM!!!!....that would suck!!!(stayed up for three hours reading entire thing)
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  • From ANON - Lysian on October 14, 2007
    I stumbles across this series not so long ago,and fall in love with the unquie story. I love it, it show the many different side of Luffy that we rarely see, then again pills does mess with you. But I love it, and please keep me update when a new chapter come out, it just keep getting better and better!
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on October 14, 2007
    Oh, no you don't fix it! Fix it and supply lemon to apologize for killing, however briefly, Luffy!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 02, 2007
    Aaaaaaaaaaaw, c'mon, you gotta write the next chapter!! T-T
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  • From Reyn on September 18, 2007
    Just dropping a quick review here cuz I couldn't resist the call of porn XD

    I agree, I like the FF version better because it's more censored, but despite that, I really liked this version as well. You were able to keep the scene going without hitch and didn't get caught up on all the smutty details that would have slowed things down.

    ...And that's all I really have to say at the moment XD I still need to REVIEW all the chapters (I'm like...what? 6 chapters behind now?) and respond to your email... I'll do that when I'm not so busy ^_^
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