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Reviews for One More Night

By : sasukeskyuubi
  • From enslavementthesis on June 19, 2008
    It's a huge pity you didn't update, this would have been fascinating to read.
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  • From Mortimer on May 01, 2008
    That was great!!! I never could image the twins being apart. But I wonder, whats gonna happen when there apart?
    Super Points for you!
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  • From sweetciel on March 13, 2008
    I was so choked up! It was so sad :( I hope that they can somehow overcome it. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters
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  • From keebz on February 29, 2008
    this is beautiful! i certainly hope you write more! you're so talented!
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  • From simonveil on December 18, 2007
    omg that was so sad and very good i hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Arisa-chan on December 17, 2007
    OmG! This made me bawl my eyes out! I haven't cried during a fic, much less a one-shot, in a very long time. It was beautiful and poignant. Truly. I'd love to read more of this story! (even if I feel emotinoally mangled afterwards ^^; [daijobudesuyo! hontouni])
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  • From Juukai on November 14, 2007
    I can't wait for you to update! I really don't think that you went overboard on Hikarus reaction. Considering their seperate personalities, I think you pegged them perfectly.
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  • From ANON - Karen on September 24, 2007
    Oh wow! That was so good! So beautifully written, so sad and so touching... Hope you update soon =D
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  • From ANON - KK on September 10, 2007
    Wow, that was.. so romantic!! *cries* Twincest as its most romantic!! =O I hope you update soon =]
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  • From fangirlqueen on August 28, 2007
    aww poor kaoru and hikaru i feel so bad for them. I can understand the pain i mean they have lived their whole lives together and having to face being seperated with one sentence...thats too much. i hope things work out.
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  • From ANON - Kitty-Chan on August 28, 2007
    Oioioi, you're sometimes annoying, but I still love you. Anyways...

    Liked the story. Can't say it's totally perfect--though the sex fit and all that stuff. Glad I remember fromthe anime, else I wouldn't be any good to state things. Unique switching of rolls for the final part, that was great to read. But normally in sex, words can't always be processed by mind--especially if it was so enthralling to both parties. Got told that by an old friend of mine from my first sex story--now I'm going into more and more of them. Keep writing, and I hope that you do continue this; this is enough to actually want me to read more. ((And coming from Ero-Daisuke, that's saying a lot, since I usually read stories like this to...))

    ~Kitsune, you're resident Foxy Rokudaime.
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  • From ladygizarme on August 28, 2007
    omt, sk, i loooove this fic you're starting!! the whole idea for it, and just.. ohh, i'm excited for it! and the first chapter, you know many of the parts i loved already, but i just want to say again: loved kaoru waking up to a warm feeling below his navel and hikaru suckling his love :p teared up for... well, basically, everything involving them being separated *sob* especially when kaoru tried to cheer hikaru up by saying at least he'd get the bed to himself, and he could find himself, and being seen as an individual since wasn't that the point of the "which one's hikaru?" game, etc. (and hikaru's responses *sobsob*) and this: We laughed for what seemed like an hour, and I only tell you this because it is the last time I remember laughing like that with my brother.

    of course, even with the sadness you managed to have cute/funny moments in there, like the line about "one sister who until the end of last year, was disguised as a brother, and one insane fan-girl disguised as a manager" heeheeheeeeee and, of course, the hideous school uniform lmao!!

    but then, ohhh, their last night together! firstly, i want to tell you how much i love the way you write them, all the simple yet deep interaction between them, their deep twin connection letting them know what the other needs and how to give it and how the simplest of touches between them feels so meaningful in the scheme of things... and then, on to their actual last night.. and hikaru telling kaoru to fuck him.. you know already that i was like O.o whoa, even though i was kinda expecting that "change up" it was still like O.o but in a good way. and it was just so.... sweet and loving and sad at the same time... a night that will no doubt give them both bouts of melancholy nostalgia as the school year drags on

    waaaah and the shirt grabbing sobbing goodbye.. and kaoru wishing hikaru didn't have to break down, not letting himself cry in front of him and make it worse *waaaaaaahsnifflesob*

    so good, dude! write more now!! i love it, i love them, i love you, you rock my sockssssss

    &hearts
    ~ lg!!


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