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  • From blaise on November 24, 2007
    I've been reading your story have read another story like yours where they are all living together but am enjoy your view of it and i hope you continue since i think you are going really good with it. Can't wait to read more.

    Blaise Nahuel Zillah
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  • From MistressMizu on September 07, 2007
    Oh I do hope you plan on writing more detailed than that. Anyhow, pretty good I suppose. You need to work on breaking up your paragraphs more, work on sentence structure, grammar... It makes it a little difficult to read when you haven't applied these things very well.
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