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Reviews for Torn Betwixt Them

By : AngieBop
  • From ANON - YannaChan on December 07, 2015
    HEy Please update! This is getting good. :)
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  • From ANON - AkimB on March 19, 2013
    Please continue!!! I love your writing style and you've got me on the edge of my seat. I'm dying to know exactly where this is going!
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  • From ANON - LadyNorth76 on January 03, 2013
    I can't wait for more. Please update soon. Thanks!!!
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  • From ANON - Bookish on July 06, 2012
    Love it! Love it! Love it! Please update! I check back all the time for new chapters, I can't wait to see where you go with this. More!!
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  • From ramblingrobin on March 19, 2012
    Oh, pretty please, more. I am dying here! You are doing a wonderful job.
    -Robin
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  • From Mirrors1984 on October 14, 2011
    Um, I was wondering if you have this same story in MM.org under the name of SolitaryCheshire. I have my fic The Solitary Twin there and the site is pretty lenient with the whole rating factor (X-Rating) lol. So I I wondered if I could just put you on story alert there to keep up to speed because AFF doesn't have story alert. *sweatdrops* So far the story is good, (loved the lemon with Kyoya!, though the whole paragraph/dialoge spacing caught me a couple of times in the word flow (new upload feature in AFF is the pits!)of the story, but otherwise its well written. Hope to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - Ravyn on October 12, 2011
    Hey, so when are you going to update?!

    Hopefully soon!!!

    I really want to see where this is going!!
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  • From ANON - Waiting rose on August 30, 2011
    God I love this one, please get more out when you can, this is an amazing story, and flows so well
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  • From ANON - AndoraT on June 22, 2010
    *pulls hair out in frustration* you leave us with a cliffy, and then the next chappie isn't a chappie? T_T that's just cruel...
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  • From ANON - az on April 20, 2009
    I like it. I'm hoping that the twins (or atleast one of them) will be possessive but a little more tender at times. Poor (and lucky) Haruhi.:)
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  • From amoraluv on April 12, 2009
    it was going good until u stopped to thank everyone with out putting up a story
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  • From ANON - Neon C. on April 10, 2009
    i really like your story! it totally rules! Please put a new one up soon. *Begs you* Its so totally awesome! i want to know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth on April 09, 2009
    I love this story (Harrah, lemony freshness!), so I hope you will write more soon! It's at such a cliffhanger moment! I mean, as far as I'm concerned, Hikaru's been pinning her against a tree for months! Give them some relief, all mighty author! lol, I sincerely hope you don't leave this story for dead. It would be such a waste! :D
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  • From cagna4 on March 03, 2009
    here's another review to that count. love the story so far though i wish the 6th chapter hadn't ended with such a cliffhanger. hope you update soon.
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  • From TellingLies on January 13, 2009
    You need to update this soon! I've never been a big KyouyaxHaurhi fan but wow, I must read more KyouyaxHaruhi now.*nod nod* I feel so bad for Hikaru, and those poor chocolates! I like it, its very steamy, most people don't do to good on the sex stuff its either impossible or it just not steamy enough, in my book you hit the money. I will continue to read this one. *gives thumbs up*
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