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Reviews for Another Teen Pregnancy

By : GreyPenInk
  • From ANON - Nelfie14 on March 12, 2012
    Oh the tragedy of the unfinished story...

    It was a great read and I loved it. Sadly I shall forever wonder if Raito is kidnapped by Travien and experimented on. Or if he ever comes to love the child within him(doubt it), or if he becomes so depressed at his situation he attempts to take his own life? Does L still die? Does Raito get the book back and all his memories? And if he does, how does that effect him and his reaction too the pregnancy?

    What happens to Misa? Does she go insane from being locked up for too long?

    *sigh* My curiosity shall never be satisfied....
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  • From ANON - Kay on January 24, 2012
    I love this story . I spent the past day and a half reading through it. I love the interaction between Raito and L. But I see you have not updated in quite awhile. Please don't let this story go unfinished. That would be tragic :(
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  • From ANON - irkm on February 11, 2011
    You are amazing. I love this pairing, but I have only come across a handful of fanfictions that held my attention. Yours definitely makes the top 3, and I have read a LOT of them. I cannot wait to read more!!!
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  • From ANON - em on May 11, 2010
    Glee! This is truly an awesome fic!
    I really do hope to read more soon, though I think the boys have more than enough problems without the insane doctor, or the mystery group!

    However, I have this weird feeling the council, may be behind his hunt for the unusual, and Light being taken may put him in contact with the third Kira anywho!
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  • From Alexis2269 on May 14, 2009
    I love this story, and it's surely the only mpreg of its kind that I've been able to find on the Internet. I'd love to see the story completed. Any idea on when this may be? You can send me an e-mail reply, if you wish, to Alexis2269@hotmail.com

    Fellow DN MPreg fan,
    Alexis
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  • From ANON - Eadha Ohn on February 10, 2009
    (looking around)

    So.... Happy birthday, Author's note? :D

    How's Chapter 6 going?
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  • From ANON - Koko on November 24, 2008
    I love your story so much I keep re-reading it, every time hoping you've put up the new chapter 6! Please please please say you won't abandon it!
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  • From ANON - Mollie on October 22, 2008
    This story is so wonderful!
    Please update soon, I'm waiting with baited breath!

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  • From ANON - vspirit on August 06, 2008
    Wow, this is a great read! For an mpreg, it's really realistic. And seeing Raito being the one knocked-up is thrilling. I like how in-character you keep everyone despite the hard-to-believe situation they're all thrust into. L being insufferable is so undeniably him. I also love the detail and research you've put into it. Looking forward to reading more of this. On fact, I'd love very much to be able to see this to its conclusion.
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  • From brook13baby13 on August 02, 2008
    This is my second story of Death Note that I have read. I didn't know there were any Mpreg...AND IT'S LIGHT HAHAHA....I haven't yet read one where's L is preg...I'm just now getting into Death Note yaoi..I'm glad you write a lot! I saw some other stories of yours I will read ater this...that vampire one...looks good. I write but its Naruto yaoi...

    Well hope ch 6 will be out soon?!
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  • From Selim on June 23, 2008
    "pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease..." [ect] is a lot better than just "cool" and that's all she wrote (I get that one all the time, it's not ... much)).

    Anyway.

    I like this.

    First fic I read.

    Made me a L x Raito fan, strictly. I came in unsure who I could see on top. This fic decided.

    Update.
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  • From ANON - Rale on June 21, 2008
    Wow! Firstly, major kudos to you for keeping in line with the main story elements beautifully. I really appreciate how you've truly planned this out with everything falling into place nicely. It's pretty rare for me to read something this faithful to the tiniest details and it's definitely a real treat. I do hope you update with Chapter 6 soon! Thank you for taking the effort to write this!

    P.S. May I strangle L too? XDD
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  • From yeagerbomb on May 23, 2008
    *tears* noooo!! i want more! i finished this (minus the a/n) last night. this is so good! i love it so much, despite several mechanical errors (mostly shifting tenses). i really like the premise, and i'm very excited to see what will happen. this is the... oh. i was going to say first, but it's the second deathnote fic i've read. the other one was only a chapter and a half (a friend was writing it and asked me to look). i usually don't like characters being ooc, but i accept it when it's relevant and backed up. so far, light's the only one really ooc, and he's preggers and afraid for his life, so i forgive him. also, while i like the idea of ramos, she's driving me crazy. i do like that she's spanish (because i can understand most of what she's saying), but her suspicion of L is kinda annoying. i want her to figure out that he's not a gangster/criminal or have someone freaking tell her. and tarvian (spelling?) needs to die! he's so mean to those poor, defenseless animals! i couldn't believe the dog was dead! so sad... *sniffle* light was sort of scaring me at first, when he was coming up with/executing his plan. it was creepy! and L can't keep it up. that's hilarious. i can just picture him trying to explain to light. anyway... sorry this jumps everywhere and is so long. i'll stop now, but please keep writing!! i'm looking forward to more!!!!!!~
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  • From Evermist on May 21, 2008
    ^.^ I really like this story. Everyone seems pretty in character for the most part, and I loved L's question of 'Wide load or thunder thighs'. :D Can't wait for the next chapter, but don't rush it! If it takes a while to get a good chapter out, then I'll just wait! *sits to wait in front of computer with cake and Death Note DVDs*
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  • From ANON - otan on March 30, 2008
    When are they going to get it on with each other?
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