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Reviews for The Creator Of Fire (chapter one fully repaired)

By : xain34
  • From the42jabberwocky on January 20, 2010
    I have no other method of contacting you, and I just received another review from you. Your profile does not contain your e-mail so I have to use this review to ask this. I know its against sight rules but its just for this one time. Please get in touch with me through e-mail as I wish to talk with you, I'm new to the site and you called me out with the authors note chapter. I did not know it was against site regulations to do that, until I discovered the forums just yesterday. Also, in future reviews, please leave some kind of criticism. I don't mind bad criticism as long as its constructive. That is all, thank you for your time.
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  • From the42jabberwocky on January 18, 2010
    I must say, for someone to walk in out of no where and start slinging words around becuase of my story I did not expect. However unlike you I will not start cat calling. I read your story on the pretense of what you said about FF.net being a kiddy site. You acted as if my my story was such. I agree that ff.net leaves much to be desired, but as I said before, this site as a really bad upload system. You want to see chapter 2 and actual story, go see what happens to the format on my AFF account and then look at the FF.net account variant and tell me which is easier on the eyes hmm?

    As for your story, I spent the time to read it and lost interest. There are other stories on this site with more flair than yours and I would actually stoop to say your story belongs more on FF.net than mine does. The characters aren't strong, and the story was lacking. This may just be my opinion as a reviewer, but that's what reviews are for. Sinners and Ragnarok are good examples of well planned and designed stories that we all should strive for. So please, if your going to bash, bash constructively. You should also learn to not judge a book by its cover. Just becuase FF.net has a lot of lame stories does not mean that they are all lame. If you think I don't know how to write, then help me write better. I would give you advice, but your A/Ns within the story stated you don't care, so i won't waste my time. Good day sir.
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  • From CrazyIvan on April 15, 2009
    Now my view of time has been so scewed this was probably ages ago, however, you sir have just earned yourself a cameo with this little number.
    >Huh, Ivan reviewed my story...And suprizingly he actually likes it...I'm in shock at the moment, one of my favorite authors actually likes my story. Even though i'm lazy and get little done. XD

    CrazyIvan pwns. O_o;

    I'm not sure which one though, my Criminal conspiracy sequal, or the soul caliber 4 one. In all likely hood the SC4 one will be updated more frequently as i have mroe ideas for it at the moment, so if you wish, check it out, you will get your cameo in chapter 4 at first.

    Oh, and keep this awsome piece of fanfiction moving, no need to let good things die off so soon.

    Semper phi, carry on.
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  • From xain34 on May 08, 2008
    Huh, suprizing...I wasn't even comming close to expecting a review from you Ivan, let alone a nice one. XD

    Thank you for the kind words, I hope you have a nice day bud.

    Untell we meet again, onigashimas.
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  • From CrazyIvan on May 07, 2008
    Fan fucking tastic. 7.5 out of 10.
    I'm afraid that's all I have to say about it. Anything less would be a crime, and anything more would take too much time.
    Semper phi, carry on...
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  • From DarkMaiden on January 28, 2008
    Sorry for taking so long to review *bows head in shame*

    I really loved chapter two and I like the changes you did in the writing style itself, very nice and simple to read.

    Poor Lucario, she's such a good pokemon, the ending is pretty sad but drama in a story is always good lol

    I'll be waiting to see the next chapters, you've done a great job so far! ^_^ Till then ****
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  • From DarkMaiden on October 29, 2007
    Hello there Xain =P I'm an idiot I really didn't see this story posted here, if I did I would have reviewed it before =S

    The first chapter is pretty cool, it's very interesting to see my story from the point of view of another character ^_~
    Yes typos are bitches, you have no idea the time I spend reading my chapters before posting them and they still ALWAYS have stupid errors.
    I obviously have no preferences among the characters that were sent to me by all the readers, but Steven is a very interesting fellow (that doesn’t mean he’ll win muahahaha, don’t worry this also doesn’t mean he’ll lose, yes I’m evil).
    I think you were one of the readers that requested to kick Team Rocket's butts, and I would like to apologize to everyone about that not happening, I tried to fulfil most of the requests but this one would conflict a bit with the story since Team Genesis is pretty much controlling TR now and they wouldn't want to bring any suspect activities towards the League.
    Also don't worry about your story separating itself from my storyline, it's not your fault, I haven't posted the flashback between Damien and Jack in the hospital room yet, that's in the last chapter of Season 1 (yay spoilers *shh*), make your storyline your own way and don't worry if it doesn't stay equal with mine (it wont since my version of Damien wouldn't need to ask for anyone’s help about medical issues, he's a pro in that area =P). It’s actually more interesting to see other possibilities and different outcomes for my story.
    I really enjoyed reading it, good luck for the next ones ;) ****
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