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Reviews for Card Captors: Heroes saga

By : SSJ04Mewtwo
  • From brockisok on April 09, 2021

    Where is the original work by Whiteshirt?


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  • From jesse766 on August 05, 2010
    I find the whole first few chapters very interesting and just amazing. Besides the amount of character development and conflict, the story of love between Lee and Sakura to be the most compelling. I say great job all around.
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  • From Scorpinac on April 23, 2009
    Hehe, nice follow on. Maybe Yelan will inform them about the whole "broadcasting" thing in future. Not that we'll actually get to "see" it. Oh, well, no matter. Very nice, quite enjoyable. And now I once again bid you adieu. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on April 19, 2009
    You're welcome, and a very satisfying conclusion all around. Although I must call you on one last, tiny mistake - at the beginning of the epilogue, you comment on the wedding being one of the most important in the"early 20th century", when I'm pretty sure you meant "early 21st century". Well, good luck in your future fics. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on April 17, 2009
    Geez, these guys can't take a hint! But then it was prophesied to end this way, for the elders that is. I look forward to their final fall, and Sakura and Syaoran's nuptials! Until then, laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on April 16, 2009
    Somehow this feels just a little bit OOC for Touya/Tori. I mean, I can see him grinding at the bit at the idea of his baby sister getting married to, well, anybody really, but I have a hard time seeing him actively trying to off the would-be groom! That aside, great chapter, and I look forward to the wedding itself! Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on April 14, 2009
    And we're sure he's dead this time, right? Just checking. I await the elders' fall, as they dearly have it coming. Also, this chapter you repeated called Yue "Uai", you might want to fix that. Well, until next time. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on April 12, 2009
    Of all the Star Trek movies you could choose to totally rip off, you have to pick V:The Final Flophouse, I mean, Frontier? Also, the last line from Tarsis read, "They shall for before you, master," when I think you mean it to say, "They shall fall before you, master." Other than that, nice chapter, definitely answers my previous question, and I merrily await the next one and Sian's eventual end. Until then. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on April 07, 2009
    Umm, did you maybe accidentally skip a chapter, cause we've gone back to Section 32 and there hasn't been any confirmation of Sian's and his crew's final permanent demise? Just saying. Well, until next chapter. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on September 28, 2008
    I dunno, Galaxy Quest maybe? One slight problem here, but unless my memory is faulty, in both the original Japanese and the English dub versions, Syaoran didn't choose to go first during the Final Judgement, Yue made that decision all on his own without either of their inputs. It would probably work better if the Dark Syaoran had said, "If you'd been smart, you'd have begged Yue to judge Sakura first and watched her fail before facing him yourself." Or something to that effect. Other than that, still good, and I still look forward to more. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on March 05, 2008
    What's that old saying? Something about, "When it rains..." Oy, this is getting complicated. And if the Elders actually stoop so low as to attempt assassination to get their precious way, they all ought to be put death upon said "dissolution" of the Council. Just saying... By the way, did you mean for this sentence to read this way - "Now, I hove you can make the few moments you have as meaningful as possible." Also - "I possibly give the Karthing name new life." Well, until the next time.
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  • From Scorpinac on February 19, 2008
    Okay, to each their own. Nice end to the arc, and next we do the time plot, huh? Sounds Terminator esque, too. Well, until it begins. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on February 17, 2008
    I thought that sounded a lot like Naraku. So the Inuyasha gang ascended to a new level, huh? Okay.... Well, the girls are back to normal and Darren's dead, so pretty much all that's left is settling the election. Oh, and you still write in the present tense, you should really try writing in past tense, it'll flow much better.
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  • From Scorpinac on November 16, 2007
    Whew! Almost went all the way into T1-T3 territory there. Nice cliffie, though, new arc sounds interesting, and I did like the hint that Sian may have faked his death somehow. And let me guess, those three virgins are known in the Japanese version as Chiharu, Rika, and Naoko, right? Until next time. Laters.
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  • From Scorpinac on October 09, 2007
    Umm, you seem to have accidentally skipped "Wills Of Steal" there. Think you can throw it in real fast? Good job so far, by the way, though you might want to try writing in past tense instead of present tense. Just saying. Laters.
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