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Reviews for Tomoyo's Deck

By : Teller
  • From ANON - Pumpkin George on January 01, 2008
    Another sexy and fun chapter. Having Meilin in it was a great addition, hope she's a frequent addition to Tomoyo's assets! Interesting how Daidouji was the one to get Tomoyo and the girls into the Religion's trap, could we be seeing a shadow of things to come with an Incest card? One more thing, I get that Yuri and Yaoi and probably Hetero are three of the four powerful Elemental-like cards, but what's the fourth one? Furry or something? Can't wait to see the next chapter!
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  • From Teller on December 31, 2007
    Yes, I know I should have tried to drag it out more, maybe my next chapter will be better, I didn't want Teller to have to write a filler when I was half-done! And yes, Foot will probably make an appearance. I can't say when, because we have a lot of cards thought out, but after reading all of Motoko's Quest (that took forever, but it was a good forever), well, we might as well have a Foot card, right? I'm not sure what card Teller's got in the works for you, so be patient. The next chapter will get posted when it's done, like with all our chapters.
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  • From TarnishTear on December 31, 2007
    A Religion Card? In a magical, perverted hentai deck? I never would have thought of that... good one.
    I love yall's concepts (Tomoyo ravaging an older 'woman' with tentacles is an idea whose time has most certainty come), but some additional details in the sex scenes themselves would elevate the story from 'sexy' to 'damn sexy'. Oh, and good job keeping everyone as much IC as they can be, given what they're dealing with. That must be kinda hard to do.
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  • From Bishonen on December 31, 2007
    That was great i hope that the next chapter is the demoness I hope shes nice the last demoness i used in a story was anything but nice Barbelo was a bigger bitch than Religion speaking of which I’ve decided to convert.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Bishonen on December 30, 2007
    I had kind of thought about suggesting a foot card and I gotta say that would be so fucking hot I’d love to see that.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2007
    oh my stars this is so sexy, please you've GOT to make a Foot card in one chapter, seeing tomoyo and sakura and meilin doing that one would be a dream come true!!!
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  • From Teller on December 29, 2007
    Yes, yes, we're working on the next chapter, there will be a futa card (hopefully soon) and as for the Yaoi...I'm leavin' that one to Teller. The real world has been depriving me of computer time and whatnot.
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  • From ANON - Pumpkin Bob on December 27, 2007
    I like that you're taking time to respond to your reviewers. That's nice of you.
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  • From Bishonen on December 27, 2007
    It's okay but i hope that a new chapter is posted soon and i like the futa card idea.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Taku on December 27, 2007
    Hey! Great job on this story! I find myself checking for updates daily. Oh, as a sugestion about your The yaio problem, In the erotic deck there should always be a futa card right?
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  • From ANON - Dobberdoffle on December 25, 2007
    Eww no, the dynamic of just the two girls and maybe Meiling to is fine right now as it is...no need for that dumb syaoran guy to get involved like that...
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  • From ANON - Kitten on December 15, 2007
    damm......
    girl on girl *moans*
    im such a horn dog
    but this is an amazing story go on please *begs*
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  • From ANON - Pumpkin Joe on December 03, 2007
    Nice new chapter. Introducing Meilin into Sakura and Tomoyo's relationship, even as a minor character, is interesting and has lots of possibilities. It would be interesting to see you work with that, maybe seeing her lust for them turning into love as she spends time with them, and if she can content herself with not being loved by them as much as they love each other...stuff like that. This story is totally the shit either way (in a good way I mean) so it doesn't matter if you take this anywhere, but, it would still be a little cool to see you go somewhere with this new thing.
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  • From Bishonen on December 01, 2007
    That was funny as hell not to mention extremely fucking hot I wish I could have the cards I would have so much fun looking forward to the next chapter.


    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Neko_Mimi on November 26, 2007
    Yes! ANother updated from you!
    God I LOVE YOUR STORY!
    No one can fuck Sakure except me?
    My, my, Tomoyo is possesive one, isn't she?

    Can't wait another updated!
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