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Reviews for Tastes of the Week

By : Obezyanka
  • From SexyTsuki on June 06, 2008
    Glad to hear you are still working on this! I look forward to the next chapter :)
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  • From WyldeKat73 on January 19, 2008
    Still waiting for chapter 4. Please put it up as soon as u have it. Hopefully it will be soon, with lots of detailed sex.
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  • From WyldeKat73 on December 10, 2007
    Another great chapter. I truely enjoy your story and I hope to read more soon. Please.
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  • From Seresagi22 on December 09, 2007
    Wow I love how you wrote chapter 3. Putting in Michiru's hobbies and her seducing Usagi while telling her the truth of her attractions was an awesome move. By the look of things it sounds like Michiru has a bit of dominatrix in her when it comes to the Princess. Oh and also nice interpretation from the animation in which Minako and Usagi think Haruka is a boy in which Michiru starts to bring to light her confessions. I really can't wait to see what you have planned for Usagi and Makota. Please update as soon as you can.
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  • From bakagaijin30 on December 08, 2007
    Thanks for alerting me to your update. The chapter with Michiru was especially cool ^^
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  • From Seresagi22 on December 01, 2007
    Oh my god now that was amazing and shocking at the same time. You portrayed Ami from her sweet, shy, bookworm to a total controled dominate woman. So awesome man I hope you update soon. Michiru/Michelle is next I beleive. Can't wait to see how that turns out. Update A.S.A.P please.
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  • From Seresagi22 on December 01, 2007
    Well that was amazing I liked how you potrayed the two as student and teacher, it was amazing and well written I can't wait to read the next chapter. If I remember correctly ami is next, can't wait to read it.
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  • From WyldeKat73 on November 30, 2007
    Another great chapter. Keep them coming ASAP!!!!
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  • From WyldeKat73 on October 30, 2007
    i know i already reviewed. but please update soon. i can't wait for what comes next
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  • From bakagaijin30 on October 28, 2007
    That was actually quite sweet ^^ An impressive feat for an adult story.
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  • From suboto on October 27, 2007
    First off, good story. I like the fact that you are branching off from the original and taking it to the next level. Though I noticed that the original had been taken down. I think you should leave it posted. I was a good stand alone piece of work.

    Now onto specific comments for this chapter. Content and subject matter wise, I though it was good. The direction you are taking is a quality one. From a technical standpoint, I thought it could use a little work. The grammar (which you yourself acknowledged at the end of the chapter) was a little off. But that is something that will correct itself over time as you continue to write. Just one of those things that comes with time and practice. So no big deal there. Perhaps asking someone to act as an editor or beta reader would be helpful. I have found that helps me a lot when I write. Just a suggestion.

    To sum it up, I thought the story was good and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From WyldeKat73 on October 26, 2007
    I hope more is to come soon
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  • From SexyTsuki on October 26, 2007
    Do you want to know how much I was looking forward to reading this? Everyday since you posted Tastes (or since i found it... the day I reviewed) I have come on to this site, when normally I check it only a few times a month. For the first few days, I checked it more than once.
    I'm glad you decided to do chapters... if you didn't post this, soon I was planning to review again to suggest that, so I could get it faster XD
    Did you take down the original? You should definitely keep it. It is amazing in it's own right.
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