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Reviews for Tie me up, tie me down

By : lechymonk
  • From Jdee on November 15, 2007
    Nice and fresh from all the yaoi up here and I love Zakuro... man I could love that guy to death.

    Love the crack pairing... Saiyuki needs more regular female characters for us not as hot on yaoi as other fangurls to use
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  • From nimblnymph on November 15, 2007
    Interesting CRACK! you've got here... and it's not TOO badly ooc either. You had Yaone's tone down rather nicely, and Zakuro for the most part felt ic. The beginning section with the tree had me laughing my ass off! I also want to commend you for voicing an opinion that I've long had; Yaone is associated with two guys who have mother complexes. Doku killed his, Kou's obsessed with his. With the things Doku did with his mom, I can see sex kinda being weird for him. And Kou is too focused on his own vendetta to offer anything beyond a quick tumble.

    Constructively, there weren't any spelling mistakes that I could see. I would have liked a little more detail through the smutty part though. That seemed to come and go pretty quickly, and it read rather choppy. It wasn't bad at all... but I want more smut, damn it!

    Judging from the end, I'm guessing you might have plans to continue this? If so, good luck and thanks for fulfilling my CRACK! addiction.
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