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Reviews for Dawn

By : chiatralfaz
  • From alicem on November 30, 2007
    I just love this story. The anime shows Yuuri comming back and everything is great. No one is allowed to feel betrayed or abandoned by his leaving them.

    This shows me how it could have been. I was happy the Wolfram stood up and supported Greta whose Father just left her without even saying goodbye. Yuuri is just so stupid!!!!!!

    Anyways I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From lovelessjayson on November 20, 2007
    Very good Chapter...made me cry...meanie...Lol anyway I hope you keep this going I would love to read more or at least a little happier. I am going to bet these were hard chapters to write and think about. Good job.
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  • From alicem on November 17, 2007
    How sad. Now that Yuuri has left it gives us perspective on how both Greta and Wolfram feel and how they felt they could go on after basically being abandoned. The anime showed how everything went back to normal with Yuuri comming back, but life isn't like this and sometimes feelings don't return after you are abandoned.

    Anyways, I am really enjoying the story and look forward to new chapters.
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  • From watermajutsu on November 16, 2007
    Very well written! I liked this chpter so far. I can empathize with Wolfram's pain, since it was very clearly and eloquently described. You have a way with words that not many has. Keep it up! I do hope you update soon, as I am looking forward to how you're plot is going to pan out. :)
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