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By : lordoberon
  • From DeetraTaFoy on January 27, 2008
    O.O Wow, I usually avoid reading Loveless fiction because most everything I've read is either horribly written or completely mutilates my favorite story and characters. But oh my God. Now I might just not read any Loveless fics because I'm sure none of them will be as good as this (although I see another Loveless fic in your profile...). It's beautifully written and I was practically on the edge of my seat the whole time lol. I am HIGHLY anticipating the next chapter!

    Now excuse my while I turn into a squeally fan-girl and obsess over Soubi and Ritsuka...
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  • From ladygizarme on January 27, 2008
    i love your descriptions in this, especially from ritsuka's point of view! his thoughts and reactions to the ear rubbing (again!) were most titillating. i also love the descrip about his body anticipating something his mind still doesn't quite understand. yes, ritsuka, you can lose control ^_~
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  • From zetsuai2005 on January 27, 2008
    I am stunned by Soubi's ability to control himself--so far. Your descriptions of the ear-stroking are marvelous, highly charged and pregnant with potential. But if Ritsuka loses his ears to Soubi, no more ear-stroking. Very well written and paced. I hope this story doesn't end soon, I am really enjoying it!
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  • From zetsuai2005 on January 18, 2008
    I followed the link from your profile to this second 'Loveless' story. I'm happy to see the same sensitivity here as in the first. It helps that Ritsuka is 14 here, but the tender and careful way Soubi is leading him into awareness of sexuality is promising for a close and sustainable relationship. Hard as it is, he is letting Ritsuka lead the way and have the power to say no even as he is saying yes. Wonderfully descriptive and insightful, this is developing into much more than just a Fighter wooing his Sacrifice. There is exploration and enlightenment, commitment and respect. Again, excellent writing and imaginative plot.
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  • From Caffeine_Junkie on January 08, 2008
    Love it love it love it!!! Great jod, I adore loveless and this it great. Update soon!!!!
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  • From LolaK on December 22, 2007
    Ho-Holy shit...I don't think there could possibly BE a better way to word your story...GAH--it's so hot it's tearing me apart! ...please keep going!
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  • From Hestia on December 16, 2007
    Chapter 3--perfect!! Wonderful!! The dawn knowledge of Ritsuka's power--oh wonderful!
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  • From Hestia on December 16, 2007
    I like the switching between the two points of view--oh, yeah, Ritsuka tie up Soubi and spank him . . .
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  • From Hestia on December 16, 2007
    Wow--Chapter 1 was amazing! Ritsuka confessing was so adorable, and Soubi's mix of protectiveness and desire so hot!
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  • From ladygizarme on December 13, 2007
    oooooooh, tail and cat ear fondling. yummy. more. NOW! please?? =^.^=
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  • From kati on December 12, 2007
    omg this is so very very hot. The punctuation and grammar are near-perfect, also, which makes the whole reading-experience much smootehr and more enjoyable. It is well written in many respects, effective imagery being one of the main ones (ie mot using the same done to death sex cliches in all their shapes and forms, such as wordchoice and sequence of events). Thank you and good luck with the next chapter! xx
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  • From SpicyAlligator on December 12, 2007
    once again, it is SO mean of you to end that there! sooooo good. you MUST update soon!
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  • From rayvenfire2007 on December 08, 2007
    I can't wait for you to update!!!!!
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  • From KuraiNeko on December 08, 2007
    OMFG!!! You cant stop yet! I just love loveless! And I have to know what
    happens to Ritsuka's ears! *giggles evily*
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  • From Mikkigg on December 07, 2007
    Very good...Yes...more please...pretty please. This has started out awesome. Thanks!
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