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Reviews for Control

By : EBlair
  • From AsukaAndShinjiForever on April 02, 2008
    The slight WAFFness was a nice touch. ^_^
    The fic itself I liked altogether there were some slight spelling/crammer errors here.
    I don't know if I'll read the other chapters though because S&M and such isn't really my thing.

    Great job so far! ^_^

    See ya around, buddy.
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  • From Anonymous7 on December 05, 2007
    As long as this remains Shinji/Asuka, I'd gladly look forward to seeing more of this. I thought it was someone else raping Asuka, but when I realized it was Shinji in her dream, and she wanted it, I liked it. Anyway, please write more for this, and I'll see you for chapter 2!
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  • From Darknemo2000 on December 05, 2007
    Yay, you finally added the first chapter of control. What can I say? It is really good Asuka/Shinji, domination (no real BDSM so far) chapter. A good technical writing, detailed enough. Not as hardcore as Anniversary (considering the BDSM genre) but again its only a beginning and a really good one so far.

    The whole Asuka dreams of having sex with Shinji is a litttle bit cliche, but you did a good job on trying to hide Shinji's identity, yet judging from the small details there and here one could still guess it was a Shinji.

    Good visual presentation. Not same as Anniversary or asuka's Punishment so far, as its still a little bit lacking but again yours on Rommels Power Plays come very close to the first two and are should be called the top best of NGE BDSM themes we have in english fanfiction so far (though again, the first chapter is not really BDSM yet, more like domination). What am I kidding? It should be counted as being on the olympus of the best NGE lemons so far as well (including not BDSM themed).

    Just like with doujins the more tlentatted writers do more Asuka than Rei based lemons. An interesting note. Don't know what it means, but maybe because its easier to write Asuka in a lemon than Rei, since Asuka seems more natural to fiot in there than Rei does. I am not saying that all the best of lemons are Asuka based but a considerable part of it, just like considering doujins, have Asuka as one of the main characters. An interesting tendention.

    Your fic in particular has a good beginning and leave one really hopeful about the continuation.

    Hope to see more soon!




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