Reviews for Don't you remember

BY : Tatiana


  • From ANON - James on October 29, 2011

    Personally, I think you are doing a great job an sincerely hope that you continue with this story. I am dying to know what Yuki will think of Natasha carrying Toruh's spirit.

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  • From Tatiana on September 04, 2008

    I thank you for the new review that was given, but you said that there were 'issues' with my grammar. I would be more then happy to correct them if you would be so kind as to inform me of what grammar mistakes I have done. I have written 12 different stories and I 'thought' for the most part one of the cleanest when it came to grammar. But all of us can make mistakes, so since I have my contact email in my profile I would enjoy thoroughly hearing from you so that I may make those necessary changes.


    And yes my dearest friends I really am working on the next chapter....slowly...painfully.

    I got Striptease to help me form a visual as to what I have in mind for Rin's little dance - song used is going to be Little Bird from Annie Lennox

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  • From ANON - hopefulroselyn on August 15, 2008

    This is great! You should totally continue this. A few minor mistakes but you're a good writer and the plot is a good one.

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  • From ANON - moirane on March 28, 2008

    im not sure how to take this? tash is 3 people? thats interesting.... and a primal Hatori... nice I kinda like that. so, whos the mystery mate?

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  • From ANON - moirane on March 28, 2008

    :( Hatori... blech (sorry, i like ha'ri/kana)

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  • From ANON - moirane on March 28, 2008

    youre gonna break haru?? how sad... :(

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  • From ANON - moirane on March 28, 2008

    love the instincts. I dont think tasha should be ha'ri's mate. I dont know why.. it just strikes me wrong....

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  • From ANON - moirane on March 27, 2008

    Im so glad Yuki's talking... that makes me happy... it also makes me happy that yuki and ayame get along...

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  • From ANON - moirane on March 25, 2008

    did I say Tohru? man Im an ass. I meant Natasha.... theyre so similar... and I do think a kyo/haru woulndt be half bad... please update!!! I want to read more!!! (i promise a review for every chapter ;P)

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  • From ANON - moirane on March 21, 2008

    dude I love it. :) the whole kyo/haru in a threesome is pretty hot (of course) please post more chapters... I really want to see where this is going... *puppy eyes*

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