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Reviews for Broken Wings

By : Tazzy
  • From theklvkid2 on October 17, 2011
    Oh please oh please oh please continue! It's so good!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2008
    Does anybody "like" Cardinal Francesco di Medici?

    There are a few minor grammar and spelling errors but nothing glaring enough to detract from the flow of the reading. The story itself is very good and I am impressed that you were able to convey some of the horror of torture without having to go into blatant detail (and that you didn't write a sex scene between the two men just to garner interest and possible reviews/ratings). It's nice to have a little something left to the imagination for a change.

    I'm very much looking forward to the rest of this. Please don't take too long to update.

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  • From JaremCrusnik on January 09, 2008
    Very nice work...with your permission id like to use some of this story....just for gaming pruposes....ill kudoe you with what I use.
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  • From vbruce on January 01, 2008
    Woohoo! Go Seth! Gods I just love her. Poor muddled Abel. He just can't seem to shift the weight of the world off of his shoulders, can he. Yay! Updates are a good thing. Got any more? Soon?
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  • From vbruce on December 19, 2007
    *poke* Where's the rest of this? Yes, I know, I'm nagging.
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  • From FogWolf on December 18, 2007
    Great story so far, I started reading the first chapter and I couldn't stop until the last one uploaded. Bravo, I'll be waiting forward to read more of this.
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  • From vbruce on December 17, 2007
    Ack! Sorry, sorry, sorry! Total senior moment. I really like where this is going. I knew that Francesco would be easy for Cain to manipulate. Poor Abel! Should be interesting to see how these events turn out.
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  • From kallipso on December 11, 2007
    This is a great story so far I can't wait to read more. Please keep it coming.
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  • From vbruce on December 08, 2007
    I'm FIRST. I think. Yay! so happy you've decided to post this. Love the lead in.
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