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Reviews for Take Away My Darkness

By : TearTrax
  • From TeaniaZazzuullii on December 17, 2007
    very pretty! I think you should continue! That would be cool! haha great job!
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  • From Araea Swiftwind on December 16, 2007
    I cried. For real. It was sad, and wonderful...and I guess it hit a bit close to home, but I loved it.
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  • From mamarita on December 09, 2007
    1st of all, it really isn't that OOC for Eiri to be that way. Think about how he felt all those years, in therapy, trying to get over killing Kitazawa and the other 2, and the sexual assault.
    2ndly, it is a good fic, and I like the end, Shuichi didn't give in the 1st time Eiri tried to kiss him, he held back, and that is not what Shuichi would have done before.
    So, as you can see, like most authors, you shouldn't critique yourself.
    Let us, your readers do that...
    In short- well done!!!
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  • From ANON - Hika on December 09, 2007
    oh man I love it
    interesting
    so cute

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  • From NettChan on December 09, 2007
    GREAT JOB!!!
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