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Reviews for Secret Lovers

By : BrittzGravitation666
  • From mamarita on January 13, 2008
    well, it's a good start, but will Shuichi be able to stay away from Eiri, and what will Hiro and Eiri end up doing?
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  • From NettChan on January 13, 2008
    I like the story & cant wait to see what happens next. Just work a little more on spelling & grammer & you'll be good ^_^
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  • From SisterWicked on December 23, 2007
    Well, all I can really say is practice makes perfect. Try investing in a spellcheck program, and work on your grammar.
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  • From snnj11220 on December 16, 2007
    Hmmm I like the idea for the story, I really do think Hiro and Shu make a nice couple. I think you should continue it but also try to get a beta because you have a bunch of spelling mistakes in this chapter.
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  • From Daxemon on December 14, 2007
    The story is so far so good, but you really need alot of help with your spelling. Keep going though. Good luck.
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