Reviews for Taking Over

BY : sailtheplains

  • From eastview on March 14, 2008

    >.< Cool story... I really liked how you paced it... I'm not really a fan of angsty fics but this is good. ^^

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  • From IceAngel on January 10, 2008

    Aw man it ends there! *sighs* I was all ready to move to the next chapter when I realized there was no 'next chapter' button. Dang! I just found this story (I haven't been able to get on AFF lately), but I just hafta say that this story is just amazing. It's so well written and it just has me wanting to read more. I actually read this in one sitting.

    I love the style of your writing, it just makes the story flow so easily. And the whole take on it is one of the best alterations I've seen on the story. The characters are done so well. And a couple of times I forgot I was reading a fanfic.

    I'd love to see what happens next. Update soon, I'll be keeping an eye on this story!


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  • From Sabaku_lotus on January 04, 2008

    I just started reading this but I am in the process of finishing it up soon

    I love how it's in Matt's perspective and the whole new plot twist. This is actually an interesting concept, although, would mello do something that extreme? (the two boy's interest in L is something...odd into interpretation.)

    keep up the good work

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