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Reviews for Overtures

By : phantomness
  • From Ari22682 on January 03, 2008
    I like how your story was written. We don't see enough Delia-centric stories, even fewer when she's with another girl at that, and this is a nice change of pace.

    I'd like to see you continue this story, though; I don't think very many people who try can pull it off as well as you can (given it's your story in the first place). Maybe you can have Delia teach Misty how to suck dick, like she suggested in the story. Or maybe have her take Misty with a big, thick strap-on, while Delia contorts the girl in all sorts of positions. Either one of those could be fun.
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  • From Bishonen on January 03, 2008
    Wow that was really ooc for Delia but still very nice a bit short but really good i love hard core yuri if you wouldn’t mind i'd like to see some Dawn/Cynthia i've got a lot of stuff i'mm wroking on so i cant do it myself and i bet you'd do great on it.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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