Reviews for Control

BY : Mello de Lioncourt


  • From ANON - Rory-chan on January 06, 2009

    *projectile nosebleeds*

    Holy flying monkeys, that was awesome. Love it.

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  • From yellow22 on March 24, 2008

    good story

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  • From IceAngel on January 09, 2008

    Wow! I don't read many Mello/Near stories just because they never seem to attract me. But what got me first was the summary, it made me wonder and really wanna read it. I'm glad I did. Wow this story was really nicely written. There was a spelling error or two, but nothing that took away from the story itself. And wow the whole thing was beautifully written!

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  • From black.is.the.new.blood on January 09, 2008

    Wow, I myself don't usually like the MelloxNear pairing, but this one was very good! It's well written with a plot thrown into a somewhat short amount of space. And, the sex scene is very well written! (heheh, I'm having to absorb as much as I can so I myself can get better at yaoi scenes!)
    It would be really cool if you continued this, I think it could go on to be a really good chapter story! (or is it already meant to become a chapter story?...if not, well...like I said, it would be a really good chatper story.)

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  • From costacollector on January 06, 2008

    you write very well from near's pov, other then a few spelling mistakes this fic was perfect :D!

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