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Reviews for Shades of Mystification

By : Hellagoddess
  • From InkHeart17 on July 11, 2008
    But L can pilot a helicopter on intuition alone. Why can't this L drive a car? I smiled through the whole chapter though. That's some good fluff!
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  • From ANON - Kitsuna on July 10, 2008
    Filler yes, but a cute chapter.
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  • From PlantangelJchan on July 10, 2008
    THAT WAS FREAKING ADORABLE!!! I know how L feels I sit like him on a constant basis and I still want to put at least one foot up on the seat while I drive. My instructor was also clutching her seat belt the first time I took my driving test.But I finally passed. in pouring rain. With one mirror missing off the side of the car. But good work on this chapter I am very much enjoying this fic and it's making me want to paint something. Oh and if you like painting stories I have a manga for you. Go look up My Cat Loki. It's adorable and the cat in it makes me think of L a bit and Raito as the artist instead. But yeah check it out and keep up your awesome writing. Love ya Hella!

    -L
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  • From IntHellsing on July 10, 2008
    Wonderful job. Even if it is just a "filler" chapter... it's still very interesting and a pleasure to read.
    I really liked the mental image of the instructor trying to get L to sit correctly in the car.
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  • From ANON - Kitsuna on July 06, 2008
    Short but worth it, very hot.
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  • From ANON - Evermist on July 05, 2008
    ^o^ The shortness was totally worth it. I haven't gotten to read this for over two weeks now, so I'm definitely glad to have a nice lemon to welcome me back to the Internet!
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  • From PlantangelJchan on July 03, 2008
    Ohhhhhh smex!Nice. I like it. Keep it coming Hella good as always. Oh and any outlook for Wolfwood's profession? I miss that one T^T. Well see you next chapter.

    -L
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  • From ANON - MiaoShou on July 02, 2008
    I looked at this last night but didn't review as after reading it I was taken with a sudden desire to be in my bedroom rather that my workroom XD Having recovered my wits - excellent chapter! L and the gag remark - nnhn! Do they actually do any of that bdsm stuff yet? Or is that a treat yet in store? I want to do a picture of Raito with his hands tied behind his back and - all the rest of it... but then, I tend to look at him and it's like he has a sign pasted to him that says 'Made For Bondage.'
    Honestly, a lot of guys would be glad to have a permanent bf and not have to bother with the whole condom thing, but no, it's too sticky for Princess Raito XD
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  • From RiamtheWanderer on July 02, 2008
    That was short, but wonderful. I was shocked to see another chapter up so quickely. Dying to know what he bought L, awaiting more chpaters soon. ^.^


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  • From goddess8878 on July 01, 2008
    This is my face... O.O for real.
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  • From Duomi on June 30, 2008
    What did I think of the chapter-- hmm-- let me think. *grins* Kyaaaa! It was good.

    "He also became substantially less verbose."

    That line cracked me up! Especially it thrown into the surprise!sex. *laughing*

    Also, L telling Raito to shut up or L will gag him was nniiiiiice. I shivered and grinned like a maniac.

    And the end-- Raito just collapsing, being pushed over comfortably, and then translating L's words-- very cute and amusing, and I loved the ...real feel to it. Can't explain that, just tried to in my head and failed horribly. Also, Raito touching L's foot while he sleeps and thinking of L's place as "home" was adorable in a "if Raito were fully coherent right now he'd probably be mildly mortified at acting so cozy and comfortable".

    I'm also betting it made L feel better before the three-week pause to notice Raito still wearing his ring! If Raito hadn't been, I think the taxi scene would have been much different. Er, Watari-taxi. The chapter was short, but it suited it! Kept to the frantic-then-exhausted feel of the two of them, so it suited perfectly.
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  • From ANON - Lamica on June 29, 2008
    Well I liked it of course ;p Im sure the others that read this will agree. Hope to see another update soon, cant wait! :D
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  • From ANON - MiaoShou on June 29, 2008
    Absolutely love this story - I read all 21 chapters this evening when I was supposed to be catching up with work XD Your characterisations of L and Raito are superb, Raito is so much like he is in the manga when he has no Kira memories - only a little older and wiser - and L is such an excellent balance of childishness, creepiness and downright scariness - but still incredibly cute :)

    I can't work out if it's finished or not as I'm not used to this site and how things are set out - but I certainly hope not, could go on reading this one for ever :)
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  • From PlantangelJchan on June 28, 2008
    Yay I love it! Great chapter dynamics and I really wanna draw Light Laying over L in the car and giving Watari that " deer in the headlights" look. Hmm I think I may draw it. It won't be nearly as good as Duomi's but I will try my best. ^_^. see you next chapter.

    -L
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  • From ANON - anon on June 24, 2008
    i really enjoyed this chapter; it had just the right amount of sweetness and forgiving tones..... =) the mystery behind l is still very intriguing. thanks for sharing and i really look forward to the next chapter.
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