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Reviews for Life and Breath (GS repost)

By : tsutsuji
  • From Bloodysyren on February 01, 2009
    Perfect, absolutely perfect. I loved the passion in this fic!
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  • From nimblnymph on February 27, 2008
    I am so GLAD to see you've posted it here as well! Already it's getting more attention, which is EXACTLY what this fic deserves!

    I know I've already gushed and spouted mad praise on the other posting section for Saiyuki, so I won't get into massive details with this one. I WILL, however, mention a few of the key points once more.

    1) For someone who claims they don't really know the characters and are new to the series, you're writing them like you've been living in their heads for years. It's something a lot of authors who claim they love the series can't even do, so you need to be extremely proud of yourself for capturing everyone so flawlessly.

    2) Your writing is exceptional. This fic in particular was well crafted as far as technique, but it's also wonderful artistically. The mood you created and the way you made everything flow and blend together is marvelous.

    3) Hot. Sorry it's not as verbose as the rest of this, but I'm still in mid-orgasm right now. This is my favorite pairing and you've made me a VERY happy fangirl. So... HOT.

    4) I'm truly excited to see what else you have up your sleeve, and not just for this fic either. That is, of course, if you plan to take this one further still? Anyway, you're definitely a writer I'll be keeping my eye on for a while.

    Take care and thanks once again for sharing this!
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  • From vbruce on February 27, 2008
    Very nice. I wouldn't worry about not knowing the characters too well you seem to have them down already. Good work.
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