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By : pinkfeline
  • From amenochikara on March 04, 2008
    I rated your story a full five out of five, concerning myself with the content. The content is wonderful and well laid out. Writing wise, however, I have a few gripes: you occasionally use the wrong form of a word (such as You're versus your) and I feel that you say "Ryuuzaki" a little too much =) Otherwise, awesome. Great ending lines, too.
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