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Reviews for The Fine Line

By : Darklingserenity
  • From ANON - KittyLynn on January 04, 2014
    I love this chapter! :3 As soon as I finished, I had to stop and do a quick sketch of something that popped into my head. So happy... thanks for the inspiration! Lemme know if u wanna see. (^o^)
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  • From ANON - Michiyo Ichimaru on July 14, 2008
    Eh~ I waited until the end to review this and tell you what I think, but I'm really sorry i did, seeing how few reviews this story has recieved despite being incredibly awesome.

    Your characterization is amazing, where most stories seem to fall short, yours had the right tension, and building of a relationship. And your OCs are actually likable, although I usually don't like them. Sable is a very likable character, and unlike most OCs, she's important to the relationships and moves the plot and affects the characters.

    So, I LOVE this story and really hope you'll continue it soon. I'm interested in seeing this final encounter between Tyki and Lavi and how it works out. (^_^)~
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  • From roxyfoxy53 on March 21, 2008
    I LOVE THIS STORY, lol please update soon i cant wait to see what is gonna hapen next love it^^
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  • From spacechan on March 18, 2008
    I love your OCs~ They usually piss me off to the point of making me abandoning the story.
    Sable sounds like a cool girl..

    WAIT, THAT REMINDS ME... thats how I found fic and why the title looked so familiar!
    The fic "Boys Will Be Boys" she mentions this story so much, no wonder, I love it too!

    The way you write Yullen makes it seem so believable, I really wish it happened that way! :sniffles:

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  • From spacechan on March 18, 2008
    W-wait, I'm the only reviewer?!
    FOR SHAME!

    This fic deserves SO much more than that!

    I'll spam you with love, my dear~
    :hugs:
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  • From spacechan on March 18, 2008
    Man, I love this story!

    Its so cute but some how STILL in-character, you know how many people manage to screw that up?!
    Oh and thanks for not making Allen so girly, thats one of my MANY peeves about Yullen fics...

    You have to update soon!! I can't wait to read more!
    I have to tell my other Yullen friends about this~
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