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Reviews for This Black Lamb

By : ChanceXIII
  • From Kaiyuke on April 01, 2008
    Geh, you know, I couldn't be bothered getting an account but because of you, I've decided that it was worth it since I really wanted to bombard you with comments about how much I love this story.

    Goodness, I was intrigued from the first sentence. The imagery in this is absolutely beautiful. I can see the events, feel them. Goodness.
    Off to the next chapter. XD
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  • From spoon10488 on March 27, 2008
    Awesome chapter. I see you have changed the story line a little. Ryuk didn't trick the Death God King into giving him two so he had to gamble to get the others. Light is also younger in this story it seems. He's 11 right? What grade is he in? I assume he's skipped a bunch of grades. I wonder did Light find Ryuk's Death Note or one of the others. Ilove this story, but I find it all confusing when you jump back and worth in time without tellings us. For example Light has the death note in one scene and then in the next Ryuk is dropping them into the human world. I love the detail you put into this story. I can't wait for Light and L to meet. I wonder if L will be white like Light. 'Perfect'. Can't wait to read more.
    =)
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  • From videl43 on March 25, 2008
    I love this story. It's so morbid. I hope you continue soon.
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  • From Fukuro on March 25, 2008
    I really like this~ *A* I can't wait to see it till the end! ♥

    (at the risk of sounding like a nerd, Raito isn't shorter than L~ they're the same height~ ^^;;; HE'S STILL UKE THOUGH; I TOTALLY AGREE. ;0 )
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  • From Tulip32 on March 24, 2008
    O.O Wow..... Hmmmmm very interesting story. Makes you look at the perspective of Raito's "perfection" from his own and others views. I love how you tied in the butterfly from the beginning to the end. Simply marvelous. ^_^. Aw, the sociopath is emerging. I actually like the innocent Raito more but as long as he isn't too psychotic then he's okay. =) Raito should always be uke. ^_^. It is how nature has declared it. This story has lots of potential. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From spoon10488 on March 24, 2008
    Awesome start! This looks really interesting. I can't wait to read more.

    =)
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