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By : amandatrue
  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    GiN said:
    Untamedladyyy, i have missed your writing. It took me sometime to find out about this site. Anyway i am a happy toad, finally Riki and Iason are reunited and making beautiful music for real haha. The last chapter was a bit hilarious, when they were cruising back from Rhea, circuits, soap dispenser blowing up hihihi. Funny funny.
    finally those creepy old dirty duschbags were cremated!!! And i am happy that Darius gets to join the Firm again, a lovely reunion between papa and son. 
    I felt soo touched when those two walked out of their shuttle to give a speach to the aristrian citizens. My chest  grew tight and tears almost formed. It felt soo reall as if i was there listening to them two speak. HAhaha i think i was sooo immersed in your story that i felt such things. 
    Anyway, untamedlady, i love your stories. Sad that it has ended, was a good and satisfying ending though. Would have loved more, with their parents and riki and Iason.,but i am content already. Cant wait to read more of your stories.   
    Author's Response:
    Thanx Rin!  You are most kind....I know there is more, but I'll be chewing on that for a bit.  This was a real e-ticket ride for me, so I'm pleased it entertained you enough for you to feel "immersed" in it. 
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    15/04/08 - 08:35 am
    On: Chapter 18
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  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    shilohin said:
    Thank you very much for these wonderfoll story. I printed it out and bounded it, and now it will stay next to the original www-story from Taming Riki.  I really hope,  that you are able to write more stories. With great respect,
    shilohin
    Author's Response:
    Sob!
    Thanx shilohi...I don't know what to say.
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    13/04/08 - 05:56 am
    On: Chapter 18
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  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    tamingriki said:
    After reading this chapter I get a niggling feeling that this may be the last chapter.  PLEASE, PLEASE tell me there will be just ONE more?  I am SOOOOOOOOOO addicted to this story.  Maybe some side stories perhaps?
    Any whoo.  I was thrilled with this chapter as all the other 17.  You could definately take over some of Kira's unfinished stories. I'm just sayin'.
    Looking to see more stories from you girl. 
                 RIKI AND IASON RULE!!!!
    Ciao!!
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    12/04/08 - 02:21 pm
    On: Chapter 18
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  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    leoandro said:
    Hi! i just thought I'd drop by and say thank you to untamedlady for making this series available at this site, since kirafics.net have been reconstructed. I hope that a lot of your followers could locate this sister website to continue reading it. Your amazing description really made it easier for me to get the picture, like I'm watching all the events in front of me, especially the wild and steamy scenes. Ha! Ha! Ha! You really had my imagination working! Hope to read chapter 18 soon. Thanks again! =>

    Author's Response: Thanx for the "HI" so back at you!  I'm pleased that you like my story, I've almost finished with Ch.18, and it's a bit long (longer than usual *smile*) because it's the final chapter.  I'm having a hard time letting it go, but oh well.  The scenes are indeed pictures in my head, so I guess my perverted side comes out that way (sweat drop!).  "See" you soon.
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    10/04/08 - 07:13 am
    On: Chapter 1 Lost Son
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  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    tamingriki said:
    Its me again!
    Went to the slash archive and although the skin design is different I can see that there is still problems.  Like your story.  It shows only 16 chapters of the 17.  Whats up with that!?
    Really, I'm just checking to see if you have chapter 18 out or still working on it.  Also, have you heard anything from Harial?
    Yaoi House is now up.  However, when I checked my order that I placed last year, the billing and delivery address was wacko!!!  The billing address was Vilde Tee, Tallinn, 12917, EE. I live in Arizona!  So, my first thought was WTF!!!!!!  Had the dleivery asddress somewhere in Florida!   I immediately contacted the office via e-mail and updated my account.  Right now just waiting for confirmation that the billing and delivery information has been rectified.
    Hope everything works out for Harial.  I know if it was me, I would be pulling my hair out and speaking jibberish.
    May we all come out of this alive and intellectually intact!
    Ciao!!
    Author's Response:
    LOL!!  Yes, every time I check to see if the site is up yet, I moan..  I'm trying to be patient.  Harial, I know is trying really hard to get it all together, so I will only have words of support for her.  As for CH.18, I'm almost ready to post, so soon ok?
    Thanx for your support and patience...
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    08/04/08 - 05:30 pm
    On: Chapter 1 Lost Son
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  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    tamingriki said:
    Hey Untamedlady:
    Still having problems posting your story?  Have you tried to e-mail Harial to see if she could e-mail you a step by step procedure to enable you to post your story?  Thats what I would do.  Let me know how that turns out.
    Ciao!!
    Author's Response:
    Only on the other website, this one is ok...I'm kind of bummed, because I have no way of letting some of the people who were following the story know it's here. And I feel bad about it ya know?  I'm working on Ch.18, at the moment, so I hope to have that one finished soon. 
    Thanx for checking in!
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    04/04/08 - 09:02 pm
    On: Chapter 17 Lords of Amoi
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  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    feathersinmyhair said:
    Just read all of this story from Chapter 1 through to the latest - Phew!!!!  Great story and nicely written - and a good storyline as a spin off from TR.  You've given Riki what he has always wanted - equality with Iason.  Keep up the good work

    Author's Response:
    Thanx for the kind review, yeah, it's quite long isn't it? Riki would never truly be happy otherwise, but a Warrior Prince- now that's a whole new ball game no?
    Thanx again....
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    02/04/08 - 10:25 am
    On: Chapter 1 Lost Son
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  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    Hey untamed lady!
    Sorry you're having so much trouble updating.  I tried to see if I could figure out how to but keep hitting a brick wall.  Maybe you should suggest to Harial that perhaps a new slash archive for authors only for posting their stories.  GOOD LUCK!!
    Ciao!!
     Author's Response:
    It's a bit messed up...I mean, this isn't the place to post this, but you know, Kira is my friend- and some people are just mean.  The site issues, are not her doing.  But your's is a good suggestion.  I'm up in the air as far as posting, and I know everyone is upset about the changes, to both the writers, and readers.  I've read her new story, and it's really good.  ALL Kira, just no bdsm.
    Thanx!
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    02/04/08 - 12:23 am
    On: Chapter 1 Lost Son
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  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    tamingriki said:
    BRAVO!  BRAVO!  Once again I was on the edge of my seat.  I don't know how many more chapters there will be but can sense maybe a couple of more.  Hope you have many more stories to grace us with.
    May the next however many chapters be as thrilling as the last 17!
    Ciao!!


    Author's Response: Thanx!  I really labored with this chapter...I don't know at this moment how far I want this to go.  But I have loved the way this story came to life....
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    30/03/08 - 12:23 pm
    On: Chapter 1 Lost Son
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  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    shilohin said:
    Hi untamedlady,
    first I want to tell you, that I love your fiction.l But in the moment there is something more important. I am afraid, that Kira is suicide endangered. I've tried to reach her over the Kira 9/11 group, but no answer. In her journal I can't find the usual persons, who are writing posts. There is something very wrong. Do you know anyone who has direct contact to her? Please contact me under this email:siremes@freenet.de
    thanks, shilohin

    Author's Response: Thanx for the kind review...I've heard from Kira several times, she is my friend, and I love and respect her.
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    17/03/08 - 01:10 pm
    On: Chapter 1 Lost Son
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  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    Kurisushi said:
    I was so excited to check back and find a new chapter!!!!! I just love this story!!!!.   I also see that you have entered it in Kira's Fanfic Challange.  I was SO hoping you would!!!!! It is an awesome story!!!  As soon as I read of her challange I immediately thought of your story!!!! It so belongs there!!!!!  Thanks for all the work you put in to making such an awesome piece.  I await chapter 16. 

    Author's Response: Thanx for the kind review!  I am so excited about this story...its nice to know people like it so much!  See ya in Ch. 16!
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    14/03/08 - 07:53 pm
    On: Chapter 1 Lost Son
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  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    Aldariel said:
    Absolutely love your story.  Being one who loves all things mystical, I am just inhaling it.  Keep up the great work.  Can't wait for the next update.  Thanks for writing even though you are sick.  We all appreciate your efforts.  Get well soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you most kindly, yes- I've been ill, but I hope I corrected most if the typo's.  See ya in CH.16!
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    08/03/08 - 10:41 am
    On: Chapter 1 Lost Son
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  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    Ryn said:
    I finally got around to reading this story today and boy am I glad I had today off. This story is so good that I didn't leave the computer.  You read and you can't wait to know more and of the story.
    I am very suprised that more people haven't reviewed for it since it is so good. [To all those who have not reviewed yet SHAME ON YOU!!!]
    Please keep up the good work I can not wait to read Chapter 15- how ever many chapters there will be. 
    Arigatou gozaimasu. 
    Ryn 

    Author's Response: Thanx for reading my story Ryn! I wish more people would review...see ya in Ch.15!
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    27/02/08 - 11:21 pm
    On: Chapter 1 Lost Son
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  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    Kurisushi said:
    An amazing story so far.  I just love how kept everyone in character, especially Raoul.  Please continue to update.  I look forward to seeing a new chapter.  I'm so anxious to see what becomes of our Prince and his Lord!

    Author's Response:
    Thanx! I've really enjoyed writing this story...Raoul will have his scene soon.
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    19/02/08 - 05:46 am
    On: Chapter 1 Lost Son
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  • From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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    Hanoko said:
    I'm surprised that this hasn't gotten more reviews.  It's quite a captivating story and the ideas behind are very interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.


    Author's Response: I agree, I wish more people would review, I really would like to know what people think, thanks for the review!
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    20/01/08 - 01:26 pm
    On: Chapter 1 Lost Son
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