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By : hawker748
  • From Platinumsabr on March 18, 2009
    Hey, me again. I know I already reviewed your story, but your profile didn't have your e-mail in it and I could think of no better way to try and contact you.

    Anyways, since this is your writing I know it belongs to you even if the characters don't, and I was just wondering if I could use a couple of your lines in one of my stories. Not blatant copying or anything like that, but the premise would be the same. The innuendo you have at the end of this story is sheer brilliance, and I was wondering if I could take from that, though naturally context and timing of the sentences would be changed to fit my story. Since I wasn't sure whether they were public domain or your own hilarious creations, I thought I should ask you first. My e-mail is platinumsabr@hotmail.com.

    But hey since I'm here, great job, again! Feel free to delete this review if you like, it really is nothing more than a request.
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  • From Backlash on August 02, 2008
    That was AWESOME. Great oneshot I must say, I've always loved Rider and hated how she dies in both the Fate and Ulimated Blade Works storylines of the game, and I just love her and shirou going at it, great lemon and I wouldn't mind seeing more added to this -wink wink-
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  • From ANON - Jonathan on July 25, 2008
    Dang good lemon here Hawker. Sad to say but their are not many Fate/stay Night stories and yours are some of the best their are.
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  • From DeusExCalamus on June 10, 2008
    Buahaha....Oh my. I *loved* it. No real typos, grammar mistakes, etc....Can we have more, though? :D
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  • From Platinumsabr on April 21, 2008
    Wow...that was incredible. Great job, I can't applaud you enough. Not only the length of the story, but the excellent grammar, spelling, and formatting. Too many people here go without proof-readers and even less take the time to write properly, but I thank you wholeheartedly for this amazing story! Besides the fact that I'm a big fan of this couple, you did everything justice nicely...except maybe the fact that Shirou could have changed the chains with his magic, from what I've been able to gather about his power. He IS good at reinforcement spells after all, and he probably could have changed something about those chains, but I digress because honestly it was too good of a story for me to care that much. Good job and I hope to see more from you!
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  • From on April 19, 2008
    Great job on a Shiro/Rider pairing! Maybe a threesome with Shiro/Saber/Rider wouldn't hurt, now would it? ^_^ Keep it up!
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  • From Omega on April 19, 2008
    I really liked how this turned out. If you can, continue with this, with the possibility of a Saber/Rider/Shirou threesome. :D
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