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Reviews for A Lesson In Health

By : Amako
  • From greatcloudninja on September 16, 2011
    Ahhhhhhhhh! My prompt got filled, and it was so sexy too! I loved all of it, but especially the end of the fantasy when Ahiru was telling Fakir about all the boys she'd slept with, and the way Fakir reacted as he walked out at the very end after realizing it was all a dream. That was just priceless.

    Thank you so much for filling my request!
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  • From bloop54321 on December 12, 2008
    Manda, awesome as ever!!
    I've read this on ff.net, but.. figured I'd share a bit of love on this site as well!

    ~Love~
    A fellow PTT fanfic nerd.

    P.S. I secretly loved Ahiru's total OOC section... I'm not saying that in a bad way- you pulled it off fantastically, and it gave a nice taste to any reader that was ever interested in the DomAhiru. I REALLY would love to see what Fakir will do to, er, teach her... Or, maybe even to see his response to any guys checking her out.

    Ciao, babe!~~
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  • From harmonyecho on June 23, 2008
    haha I like how you had her be totally out of character but made it work anyway... honestly i would love read more of this, I liked your build up and concept. it was fun and light hearted, and the build up was very enjoyable.
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