Reviews for Malfunction

BY : Rue Ryuuzaki

  • From Infek on November 21, 2008

    Fabulous story. Really impressed with the slight undertone of hopelessness (at least as I saw it) that underlined the events.

    It was so beautiful.

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  • From Enslavement Thesis on May 17, 2008

    That was a very well done one shot. Somehow Light ignoring it just seems him.

    Anyway, it worked really well, and she is very impressed.

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  • From InkHeart17 on May 17, 2008


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  • From ScreamGuy on May 07, 2008

    How sad, I always feel terrible for Kira and for L. Now there's a dark little cloud hovering over my head . . . wishing that neither Kira nor L had to die.

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  • From Duomi on April 30, 2008

    'kay, had to open this while reading so I could start recording my favorite bits.

    "For as much as Raito loved himself, there was always that part of him that he hated. Even if he didnít know it."

    Very pointed, and I really like that line!

    Also, Raito appreciating Misa simply because it was easier to say he had a girlfriend... *laughs* I relate to that so well. Even if Raito weren't repressedly homosexual and just truly disinterested in people, for the purpose of social norms and pestering family, being able to say he is in fact dating someone would be a relief of pressure.

    "There was something in both their eyes, and it was Raitoís memories, and it was Lís knowledge of their return. He knew, but he could prove nothing, perhaps evenÖdidnít want to believe it."

    I love your writing style. Didn't mention that yet, but I very much do! You turn a lovely phrase. I liked this story! I will read your others. Umm, a bit later though. *stalked you briefly to your AFF bio* Not boring at all! Very amusing. And the "Yes, I recommend reading" under "Recomended reading" (just noticed they spelled that wrong...) nearly killed me with unexpected laughter.

    One more... oh, yes, I remember. The "...pain running through and out his veins" was also a nice phrase. Thank you for writing this, I enjoyed it!

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  • From spoon on April 28, 2008

    very interesting take of Raito's life.

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  • From Kotetsu_Kaburagi on April 28, 2008

    Wow this is one of the first I've seen that was articulation through the entire fic. I beleive it does take a well rounded mind and thought process to understand it fully, and you will have some telling you that it was hard to read but don't worry about them because from what I observed this fic is not for the feeble minded it seems to go so much deeper than mere expression of a subject and elaborates further the circumstances of what the characters all face on a whole emotionally. I rather enjioyed reading this and sex was not needed here it would have just ruined the continuity of it. Good job I appluad your articulation skills.


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