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Reviews for Breaking Point

By : HitomiBrighteyes
  • From ANON - biology on August 06, 2008
    OMG. I've been waiting for sooo long for a fic like this! It's simply brilliant. Your ability to create the atmosphere is nothing if not enviable. Keep writing! I'm hooked!
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  • From dacrayzblaze1 on August 03, 2008
    there should be a sequel where they engage in intercourse on top of the piano.
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  • From ANON - dacrayzblaze1 on July 22, 2008
    omy goodness i always love your stories. your characterizations are awesome and on point. even if its OOC you make it so believeable. and the lemon always makes me happy =]
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  • From slayerette0 on June 27, 2008
    Cool, a Soul Eater fic. They really need a soul eater section on this site.
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  • From ANON - DaRkNeSsNeVeRsLeEpS on June 26, 2008
    I know i have already reviewed your story but, I wasnt sure if you were aware of the new soul eater category up here. You should add your fic. Oh and by the way your fic seems to be better each time I read it! XD
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  • From ANON - DaRkNeSsNeVeRsLeEpS on May 24, 2008
    OMG, CONGRATULATIONS YOU HAVE WRITTEN THE FIRST SOUL EATER LEMON! I LOVED IT! I DEMAND A SEQUEL OR A CHLLANGE FIC THATS A SEQUEL TO THIS ONE! IT WOULD TAKE PLACE MAYBE A COUPLE MONTHS AFTER BREAKING POINT, SOUL WOULD BE SILENTLY JEALOUS AS HE WATCHED OTHER MALES START TO NOTICE MAKA :MAYBE A GROWTH IN HER BREAST SIZE OR SOMETHING ELSE?XD: THEN THERE WOULD BE A AWESOME SMEX SCENE WITH MAKA ASKING HIM WHAT THE HELLS WRONG, AND HIM REPLYING THAT HE CANT STAND THE WAY OTHERS LOOK AT HER :I'M SORRY, I LIKE POSSESIVENESS TO A POINT: HIM GIVING HER A MARK WHERE OTHERS CAN SEE IT OR SOMETHING? WHAT DO YOU THINK? SOMETHING TO WRITE WHEN YOUR BORED OR SOMETHING, HOPEFULLY YOU WILL CONSIDER THIS, I'M SO GLAD YOUR NOT SOME STUPID AMATUER WHO DOES NOT KNOW HOW TO WRITE. BECAUSE THATS WHAT I THOUGHT THIS WAS AT FIRST AND WAS LIKE IF THATS WHAT THIS IS IM GOING TO BE PISSED AT THIS PERSON FOR GIVING ME FALSE HOPE THAT THERE WAS ACTUALLY A WELL WRITTEN SOUL/MAKA FIC! BUT PLEASE DO CONSIDER AND HAVE A WONDERFUL TIME DOING IT! I APPLAUD YOU FOR MAKING THE FIRST SOUL EATER LEMON NAD THAT IT WASNT COMPLETE CRAP! YAY FOR WRITERS WHO KNOW WHAT THIER DOING!
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  • From dirtygirl42 on May 14, 2008
    It's great to see a Soul Eater fic on the site! Great job - well written and hot!
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