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Reviews for Return to the Labyrinth

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  • From ANON - Ranna on November 15, 2008
    Yeehah! Yue wins, you bitch Rai! *dances in a giddy circle, then falls down exhausted* Yes!
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  • From Scorpinac on November 15, 2008
    And quite the action packed climax it was, too! Guess Rai had a soft spot after all, just couldn't let his child die. And Syaoran discovering his own ability to throw lightning, very cool. And I definitely liked Sakura getting all tough like that, good for her! And I really liked the whole city rallying to her and Syaoran's side, yay for them! It was also nice to see Touya and Tomoyo both reunited with Sakura, and Yue finally doing something instead of just sitting on the side lines like a little wuss. Yeah, Rai got himself a righteous smackdown, kind of... Well, here's hoping the muse gets back with you in time for next Friday. Laters.
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  • From ANON - cherrixwolf on November 14, 2008
    Wow ♥

    I am in sheer awe of how amazing and epic this chapter was. All of the protagonists are finally in the same scene in the same chapter! This chapter had an amazing flow to it starting with Sakura's determination to save Syaoran to Yue's arrival and finally to the battle scene.

    While Sakura's still learning to control her wings, Syaoran now has thunder power? (...i just imagined Syaoran wearing a pikachu costume haha XD) I wonder how he'll use his power, when he knows how to control it anyway. And poor Tomoyo D: At least Rai's not dead... for now. I'm sure Syaoran will be devising the best way to commit patricide.

    Kero's back with even Ruby Moon and Suppi cameos! And now that Rai's out of the way, the lovely tension between Yue and Touya is sure to return~ Though I'm sure Syaoran (once healed) would have a few things he'd like to say to Yue as well. But the Touya and Syaoran interaction in this chapter was a great addition naturally including Touya's death threats. Which leads into a potential scene of Touya having a talk with his sister that's bound to be explosive and loud.

    Have I mentioned how amazing this chapter was? ♥ And you're even more amazing for writing it ♥ ♥ ♥ Best of luck beating writer's block!! (YOU CAN DO IT!!! ♥♥♥ ...but no pressure :D)
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  • From ANON - aleanach on November 13, 2008
    I had not thought you would have posted another story after 'Pleasure Slave' which took you at least 3 years to complete...seems like I thought wrong. While this is a pleasant surprise, 'Labyrinth' and 'Return to the Labyrinth' seems to pale in comparison to 'Pleasure slave' in certain areas. The change in the character of Yue is better in this series and make him seem more alluring, however, the sexual tension in this series cannot compared to that in you first story. Maybe it's because 'Pleasure slave' was the first to come out. but what surprises me most is that you actually finished 'Labyrinth' within a year even if the ending left me feeling quite unsatisfied, it did not feel like an ending and I would have been sorely disappointed if you had left it there. Its continuation is quite satisfying but I do hope that you would continue updating it regularly. It is a well-written story.
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  • From vix111 on November 13, 2008
    So much love for last chapter. Especially the title :3

    I mean, that magnificent bastard was manipulating him from the start, and we are not surprised at that, but at how he acted all lovingly. And we can believe it, because its true. Seems like this Yue did learn how to tell half-trues from Clow.
    Oh, the two of them, it was just too good.

    And the ending, gosh, Touya really did hit a nail with Li there. And Yue is going to realize it XDD
    I have very few words to feed the muse this time, but I hope it helps enough so we get the next chap on friday :P
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  • From ANON - cherrixwolf on November 12, 2008
    Of all chapters to NOT read as soon as it came out.

    I knew something was up with Yue. He was a little too innocent in the beginning to be the same Yue from The Labyrinth. And Touya's being smart for once, seeing through all of Yue's ultimatums. Now the only reason I'm not freaking out about Syaoran is because I know you won't kill him... right?
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  • From Scorpinac on November 08, 2008
    Ooh, that manipulative bastard! Touya's right, he didn't learn a thing! Some people just can't be taught, I suppose. But it feels like we're winding down to a finish, sadly. Oh, well, all good things and all that, right? Well, until next chapter, then. Laters!
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  • From ANON - Hinata's Twin on November 08, 2008
    Dear god, Touya's got guts, our little Peach Blossom better know what he's doing. As for Yue, I would really hate him (and you) if he doesnt help Li. And poor Sakura she's alone at the expense of Yue's sick perversions and Touya's stubborn need for independence. They need to get their priorities straight and help the poor girl. But ofcourse this chapter was wonderful just the one before and the one before that and the one before that and the one befo....
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  • From ANON - Gryffgruff on November 07, 2008
    Oh, I loved this chapter! :3

    Touya and Yue are both so evil towards each other. But I love it like that! xD

    But, please let them get a happy ending! PLEASE!!!

    I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Absinthe on November 07, 2008
    No, no, no, no, no! Please *begs on knees* happy ending, PLEASE! Please let them end up together properly this time.
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  • From ANON - Ranna on November 07, 2008
    You are pure evil. *shakes her head in admiration* Just when I thought it would turn out one way...bam! You go and change it up on me. How sneaky of you!
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  • From ANON - Snapelicious on November 07, 2008
    Jeez, Touya and Yue're perfect for each other... THEY'RE BOTH FRICKEN EVIL!
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  • From vix111 on November 06, 2008
    Well, that can't be good for Li. Poor guy will keep on suffering, it seems.
    But Sakura will be his...princess in shining dress? and save him XDD

    The heart, I was skeptical about it when I read the review, but it makes sense. But didn't Touya say they both met once every full moon? Now I can't wait to read just how that worked, with him all missing and his heart broken.
    ...wouldn't it be more appropriate, as title, "the consort's return" hehehee
    others would be, "Heart's Return" or "The King of Heart", lol, that second one is a bad pun for Touya.
    I'm not good with titles XP

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  • From ANON - astridrai on November 03, 2008
    I absolutely love what you did with Eriol. And I love Touya's reaction to Eriol. ...And I can see Kaho as a peacock which, in some ways, is rather worrying. Can't wait til next friday. It gives a whole new meaning to TGIF
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  • From ANON - Absinthe on November 02, 2008
    Ha! I KNEW IT!! lol. Ooooh, things are really getting nail biting now, I want more damn it! *g*
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