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Reviews for The Shadow Aspect

By : Jessup
  • From ANON - Obscure Reader on October 16, 2016

    Like so many interesting stories I've found on here, I can't fathom as to why this one was abandoned.

    The only fault I've found was in the formatting of it, as it is oddly spaced and has question mars all over the place.

    I'd really like to see this one completed.


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  • From ANON - darkarch on June 20, 2010
    holy crap, this is an awesome story.

    It is no small feat to be able to blend the erotic and the mindfuck, and yet you have. I enjoyed reading this, and I'm hoping for another chapter sometime in the near future!
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  • From ANON - Negativety101 on August 07, 2009
    I personally think this to be one of the best done Eva lemons ever. It's very impressive how rather than ignore or gloss over the charcters psychological issues to clear the way for sex scenes, you instead incorperate them, and make them the heart of the lemon. This is a truly great read, and I do hope you will continue it.
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  • From GroveWolf on December 09, 2008
    i dunno so far shinji hasn't actually raped anybody so whats so bad about his experience and what will happen between him and asuka and him and rei?
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  • From inuw33d on December 04, 2008
    More. Moooore. This is one great story, great plot, accurate depiction of the character's personality's. Not to mention the classic Rei Shinji / Asuka Shinji action. More Chapter's, More review's. As for constructive critisism, I've none to give. I've yet (yet being a relative term as I don't expect) to find anything wrong with your story. Anywayz, MORE!! I love it, love it, I want some more of it. ;D LOL
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  • From ANON - Jimbo on November 24, 2008
    Great story so far. The shifting between the different situations is done really well. I hope you continue to expand on this story for it has great potential.
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  • From Neferius on September 16, 2008
    You've got a great thing going here. The psychological way you threw scenes together was a little bothersome at first but it plays well with what Leliel is doing.
    I'm curious about what happens next so I hope to see a new chapter soon.
    Read ya Later.
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  • From LordSaturn on August 27, 2008
    This is an interesting story. The rape aspect worried me but you pulled it off tastefully.

    Also your use of tense is strange. I got beat up in reviews for using present tense, so I switched to past tense to please the readers.

    Great story.

    Lord Saturn

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  • From SuperMutant on August 25, 2008
    Great story. Very descriptive action, and I really like the way you started at the ending.
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  • From ANON - Acekial on August 25, 2008
    I have to say, i am very impresssed with this story. It is unusual to find something on this site beyond mindless smut or WAFFy bullcrap. There is real emotional content in this story, real character depth. I truly belive that you have managed to capture the mindset of all those involved, and your use of wroding and diction is simply amazing. I await with batyed breath for the next installment of this story, and hope you are able to keep up the quality of the work that you have done so far.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on August 21, 2008
    Okay I'm excited, scared, horny and anxious all at the same time... Congratulations I'm more confused than I've ever been and is excited about the next chapter. Please update soon.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on August 18, 2008
    So far pretty good, I never understood the Angel Mind thing and I can't wait to see Asuka's turn and then what happens to all of them together inside of the mind and in the real world so please update soon. and keep up the great work.
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  • From DetectiveArcher on August 13, 2008
    From one writer to another, I must say I enjoy your work. Currently I'm working on an Evangelion story on FanFic.net, but I eventually plan to branch my writing here. When I do post a story here, I can only pray it's half as well written and thought out as yours. You seem to have an uncanny insight into the minds of the characters and write dialogue and actions that seem realistic for the, a feat that I constantly struggle with. I wait with bated breath for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
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