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Reviews for Low of Solipsism

By : MarchofDeath
  • From XXROXYXX on January 16, 2009
    Hey ^_^

    I am LOVING this story.The plot is wonderful, really dark and twisted and the characterization of Eriol and Syaoran is spot on. Havn't read much fanfiction or wrote it in a LONG time and this story is making me want to start it up aain!

    I hope you keep at this wonderful story, and look forward to reading more!
    Luvs,
    XXROXYXX
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  • From JeffyRoll on September 22, 2008
    to continue where I left off:

    Eriol is being prtrayed very well. His emotional conflicts are awesomely dipicted as being a conflict against Syaoran's own. It's almost like two sides of the same coin...And I loved the love scene. The buildup was FANFRIKENTASTIC.....And I want to compliment you on one particular thing, and that's how you didn't overload us with Japanese or chinese phrases!! GOD DAMNIT I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE DO THAT! I feel like, yeah sure, a couple is fine, but if you use them every other word, it's just retarded. And you used them AWESOMELY. two thumbs up for that. And I like how you have woked in Spinel and Nakuru as minor supporting characters. I know it must be had to work characters such like that in, but you did it extremely well.

    As for the new chapter, I have to say, I hate that you left me on an angsty bit like that!! ;__; *kicks you* I love how Syaoan is dealing with his love/crush fo both Eriol, and his dedication to Sakura. Especially when he described how he thinks both of them feel for him. And Eriol, I feel soo bad for him, cause he WANTS to be with Syaoran, but he thinks he can't because it isn't 'in the cards' (haha, get the joke?) And I LOVED the angsty argument....I swear, though, I wanted Eriol to just grab Syaoran and throw him over his shoulder and take him to his bed and just SCREW HIM!! O__O XD lol, maybe not really.....but man, I was really feeling for them both ;___; they want to be together damnit!!!

    .....I DEMAND MOAR WOMAN!!!
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  • From JeffyRoll on September 22, 2008
    Okay so, now for my super special awesome review...(I hope XD) of what I have read so far, and then your new chapter

    SOme of this I've already told you, but I'll go ahead and repeat it.

    I LOVE the way you have converted and RP into a story, I would never be able to guess that this was once and RP if you hadn't stated ahead of time that it was. Also, I LOVE how you have captured the characters without making them horribly ooc (like some people do). Syaoran (to me) seems like a hard character to portray, because he's such a huge combination of teenage angst, anger, intelligence, and apethetic..ness. You, however, have captured him excellently. I love how recluctant he is in having to go train with Eriol, and then how confused he feels inwardly towards his feelings for Sakura and for Eriol. I especially liked it when he said that he wasn't sure if what he was feeling for Eriol was like what he felt for Sakura, because as this story pogresses, it's obvious that those feeling are going to begin to become extremely muddled and questionable.

    FOr Eriol, I love how you've captured him. He's got that whole, "Oh, I'm so wise, yet I like to take that wisdom and use it to be a little mischeivious"...type thing...
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