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Reviews for Walk forward, into the world

By : Ainzfern
  • From ANON - Lily on January 26, 2013
    I would like to thank you for writing this heart warming story. I got so attached to the characters of Ai No Kusabi that the ending left me somewhat forlorn. I have been looking for a fanfiction to cheer me up and yours has done a wonderful job in giving another life to those lovely characters that are Riki and Iason.

    Thank you

    Lily
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  • From Deandraquin on October 23, 2008
    I would like to compliment you on this marvelous story.

    It took me a full day to read this story because once I started reading I couldn't stop.

    I think it is fair to say it takes a lot of skill to write an actual continuation
    of a story that ended so tragically and definite as Ai no Kusabi and make it seem very
    plausible for it to continue as your story did.

    It was a true pleasure reading this story. Keep up the good work.

    Huggles
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  • From Sagenwarrior on September 14, 2008
    I love this fic! Your take on riki and iason relationship is totally what i had been looking for~ I mean all you can ever find is that BDSM stuff. I mean where the love in that? I really enjoyed the cuteness of the couple and hope to see more of these two from you.
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  • From JenniferC on August 27, 2008
    Wow! When I pictured the scene between Guy and Riki,it was full of cursing and yelling with them ready to take swing at one another. What really happened was ten times better. It just shows how much Riki has changed over the years. I really love this new person he has become. The relationship between Riki and Iason is wonderful too. The fact that Iason is working with Jupiter to make a change in their world, well, it makes me want to bounce in my seat and clap my hands! LOL.
    I've always been one to fight the idea of Master/slave relationships. I tend to read them and shout in my head 'What are you thinking, fight them, take your freedom back' but the way you have changed this into an equal standing "almost" between them is perfect. It doesn't seem to be the 'while I love you, I am still your Master and you're still my pet so you have to do as I say' situation. I'm really looking forward to more!

    Jennifer
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  • From 90McPhee on August 26, 2008
    Wow... you've written an incredibly interesting story here.
    I love how you've carried on the story line from the origional plot in such a seamless way, very well done! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Thank you for sharing your exceptional work. ^_^
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  • From JenniferC on August 24, 2008
    This is really an amazing story. Your word usage is a refreshing change from the normal standard. I'm writing my own ANK story at the moment and I find myself full of envy. The story idea is very original and interesting. Also the changing of of timeline and scene is smooth and flawless. Very well done. Thank you for sharing this with your readers. I look forward to reading more or your work.
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  • From mistysooty on August 24, 2008
    Hi, good story. Please keep it up as I want to see Guy's reaction to Iason and Riki.
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