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Reviews for You can't make me love you

By : JenniferC
  • From ANON - Talltree-san on March 29, 2010
    I really like this story so far. I can't wait to read chappie 7 :)!
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  • From Ruuka on December 13, 2008
    I really liked it, i love Riki!
    He's soo sexy ;)
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  • From ANON - celestialuna on October 31, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Celestialuna on October 31, 2008
    Poor Riki, he's finally getting the hint.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - celestialuna on October 31, 2008
    Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - celestialuna on October 31, 2008
    looking realy good!
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  • From ANON - Celestialuna on October 31, 2008
    OMG!!!! that made me shiver! awesome start.
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  • From Ainzfern on September 29, 2008
    RE: Ch 5 - Ohhh my! Now comes the battle of wills, I expect. Lovely chapter (Sorry I didn't review earlier. Been a bit hectic in RL, LOL!) I really liked Iason's reaction to Riki's attempted seduction, the realization that the man he has taken into his home is *not* the traditional Pet, and thus will not act in the way a Pet would. It was quite interesting to see his moment of temptation, his self-doubt. And, although he resisted, I can't help but wonder if he is starting to realize that he might just have taken on a bit more than he's used to handling. *GRIN* As always, loved Riki's internal monologue - still plotting, planning, ready to take any opportunity to escape. Now, more than ever, I'm really looking forward to seeing how this story progresses, *GRIN*.
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  • From SirynsMagick on September 20, 2008
    I'm gonna guess that now comes the fun part where Iason puts on Riki's pet ring. I can't wait to read more. When will Riki start rebelling (besides the towel thing)? What will his first punishment be? Oh please tell me!!

    Ganbatte!!

    Ryn
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  • From Ainzfern on September 13, 2008
    Ooo! Chapter four! I really love the way the Riki appeciates the luxury of Iason's home/life, yet he never loses sight of his main goal. I must confess, I've sadly seen some fics where Riki is presented as a kind of two-dimensional dark-haired Bimbo and, even worse, these fics have attempted to make Riki look smarter simply by decreasing the intelligence of his co-characters (Katze, most notably, which just riles me to *no* end, LOL!) You don't do that. You're presenting the man here as a complex and multi-layered individual. I love that.

    Also really adoring Iason's internal monolougue... really gives depth and believability to his desire to step outside of the Elite's conventions and select a Pet that touches his imagination and mind, as well as his body. Very nice. *Very* in character, IMHO.

    Ah... I noticed in your profile that your E-mail is hidden. (I was hoping to touch base directly, as I wanted some advice RE my latest story...)I'd be utterly delighted if you would contact me on my personal E-mail - ainzfern@hotmail.com - Totally up to you, of course, but I do feel a certain kindred spirit in you when it comes to presenting these characters, and I would highly value your opinion.
    Cheers - Ainzfern.

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  • From Ainzfern on September 12, 2008
    Sorry to not have reviewed Ch.3 a bit earlier. Been a bit hectic in RL... I must say, I really like the way that you write Riki - trying to seduce his new 'master', while still remaining almost coldy calculating inside about how and when he will escape. I like the fact that you show him as highly intelligent in his own right. (Which he undoubtedly *is*.) Kudos! Really looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From HarukasWomen on September 01, 2008
    Wow I'm Impressed. If you didn't say this was your first story I would have never known. It's a great story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From SirynsMagick on August 29, 2008
    I will say this: This story is freaking awesome!! Iason kidnapping Riki, then Iason's reaction to finding out that Riki doesn't tend to get much food. I can't wait to find out how Riki will react (though I'm sure it will warrant punishment) to Iason forcing him to become a pet. I imagine he will be furious with Iason and may very well try to strike out at him.

    Please continue and update soon.
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  • From Stevie736 on August 28, 2008
    Great job for a first fic. You've got me interested. I hope to see more soon.
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