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Reviews for Watari Pt 1: L\'s Heirs

By : DeathNoteFangirl
  • From HarukasLoveChild on May 01, 2010
    OMG! I mean...not that I don't find ALL of what you've written to be absolutely epic, but honestly, the Phoenix Wright references are making me jump up and down like an overly exited fangirl...XD Klavier Gavin...damn. I've beaten all 5 games in the PW series and damn...yes, beautiful reference there.

    Sorry, I'll try and finish this review with a bit more composure. ^^"

    Umn...wow. I've been reading straight through from It Matters and I honestly feel utterly blown away by the sheer creativity and utter mastery of your writing. It feels more real than the canon. My brain feels like it's been dragged through the spinning of a washer and dryer and then run over by a semi-truck...and I'm loving every second of it.

    Thank you so much for posting your stories, they are incredible. ^^"
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  • From DeathNoteFangirl on April 22, 2009
    It was difficult to slot a MxM story between the Wataris, because the actual events follow them too closely and there's only an hour between one ending and the other beginning.

    I promise that the 2000 hits story for Wp2 will be pure MxM smut. :D
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  • From tdorian on April 22, 2009
    oh this is great !! But I need some Mello and Matt so much...and I mean YOUR Mello and Matt.ah... Aida
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  • From DeathNoteFangirl on December 31, 2008
    Aida! I'm so sorry that I've only just spotted this here. -.-

    Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm really touched. Merci beaucoup. :D
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  • From tdorian on December 11, 2008
    This chapter was is emotional,so strong, the wows they exchange are beautiful enough to cry.Wonderful work.Aida
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  • From tdorian on December 01, 2008
    Hi, I'm Aida from Paris France.First of all I wanted to tell you all my admiration for this on going serie.It's totally amzing and it has rocked my life for months now !!
    I'm sorry I never reveiwed before because it had taken me ages to understand how this site works ,how to lpg in etc...lol But now it's done and the main reason was for me to be able to thank you for all the great time your stories give me.I'm a udge fan of Death Note and of Mellow particulary.Writing your words is like watching him...umbelievable.The chemistry between the two characters, your wicked plots and writing skills totally amaze me.
    so far I've read everything 'til Watari part 1 (starting today !!) so I guess you'll have me now as a regular reviewer !Aida
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  • From DeathNoteFangirl on November 09, 2008
    Thanks, Nine Lives, I've altered that. I looked it up and both Plaza Sesamo and Barrio Sésamo were in Spanish, I should have checked with you which one it was actually in Spain. -.-

    I think it's alright to be sentimental reading this one. I was crying whilst writing it in some parts. I had to stop and go and make a cup of tea over the 'don't let me die like this' part. Were you ogling an amarillo chiquitito as well?
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  • From Ninelives on November 08, 2008
    Oh btw, I guess that with "Plaza Sesamo" you meant Barrio Sésamo. That's how it was called in Spain :)
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  • From Ninelives on November 08, 2008
    I love this insights of Matt's mind, are very interesting. And his trust in Mello is adorable, though a little sad. Why? because Mello's the only thing he ever had *wipes tear away* Sorry I'm in a sentimental mood today.

    Matt thinking of "blond" as "yellow" reminded me of this time I had the same problem reading a BDSM informative site.
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  • From DeathNoteFangirl on November 01, 2008
    Fierce: It's a fair cop... which bit specifically though? :p

    MattKun: Thank you very much, I'm really glad that you're enjoying them. 8D

    Lluvia: I really am blushing now, thank you very much.
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  • From Lluvia on October 25, 2008
    I like your stories so much!
    I love how you describe Mello and Matts' relationship.
    And the idea you had in this fanfic in particular is really brilliant. I couldn't get enough of it. You are really one of my favourite authors, maybe the best!
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  • From beckychanmattkun on October 22, 2008
    I just have to say.
    I love your stories.

    They're brilliant, I hope you do more for Matt and Mello.
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