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Reviews for Elemental Battles

By : SSJ04Mewtwo
  • From Akewataru on May 13, 2009
    So, even Paul has Dark type powers...I like the shadow master's punishment for Misty. I'm surprised that you didn't go into further details, if you know what I mean. Characters to add to Ash's team, hmm...I would try using the Frontier Brains, and the Elite Four and Gym Leaders from the Hoenn and Sinnoh that you haven't used yet. Since you've included Paul a fourth generation character, you definitely need to include the elite four from Sinnoh: Aaron (Bug), Flint (Fire), Bertha (Ground, on an additional note Bertha might be Agatha's younger sister. Check their names in English and Japanese, and their pictures, they are just alike!), Lucian (Psychic), and Cynthia (the Champion that uses various types.) If you need info about them individually, Bulbapedia is you one stop shop. Til' next time!
    Sincerely,
    ~Akewataru~
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  • From Akewataru on May 12, 2009
    Nice touch letting Ash catch the same Aerodactyl that would have made him its breakfast after such a long nap. Let me see if I have this right: Dark can take out Psychic, however Light can take out Dark? It sort of makes sense, however doesn't the Light element have psychic abilities? Wouldn't Dark have some effectiveness against light? Also, which has effectiveness over the other: shadow or light? Or is it like the Dragon type where it is super-effective against each another. This is only theory, because I highly doubt shadow could attack light since they are one and the same and doing that would be attacking itself
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  • From Akewataru on May 09, 2009
    Thanks again. So, there will be a part two to this battle with Misty, I'm glad. By the way, are you making it that Misty is becoming mentally unstable? Also, thank you for giving me some hinting of what the situation is with Lance and Claire. Now, what I am really interested in seeing is how Giovanni plans to get rid of Anabel. Til' next time.
    Sincerely,
    ~Akewataru~
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  • From Akewataru on May 07, 2009
    Wow, you really used my idea well, I'm quite flattered. I'm glad we are starting to hear the voices of the characters in the story. Not that Ash, Valdrade, and Anabel aren't coolest, but there are other people in the world. Lance and Claire being cousins only by marriage? Are you going to elaborate on this or not? Oh, I forgot to mention for last chapter that giving Brock a girl was a good idea. He needs lovin' too. Lucy was really one of the few girls in the anime to actually have a crush on Brock. This chapter coming up I think I'm going to really like. However, one has to wonder though, how hard of a time is Ash going to have defeating Misty? Til' tomorrow.
    Sincerely,
    ~Akewataru~
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  • From Akewataru on May 07, 2009
    I guess that's the power of steel influencing Paul. Here's some food for thought: You should give Misty the ability to be able look into water to see what she wants. Sort of like a magic mirror, but with limits, like she can only see what water somewhere else is reflecting. That may seem like too much power, but water is a special element. The amount on the earth is finite (although a large amount indeed) but indestructable. Rather, no more is being made and none of it is being destroyed. The only way I can see to "destroy" water is to break or decompose it into Oxygen and Hydrogen, however this requires a great deal of energy heat or electricity (237.13 kJ). There are several things you could use here, the first and last thoughts being something I plan to use in the future. Update soon! Keep your muses talking!

    ~Akewataru~
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  • From Akewataru on May 05, 2009
    Wow, you're quick! I just posted that review this morning. By the way, "Pewter" is spelled this way. You might have made Paul a bit out of character when he attacked Anabel. Paul may be an antagonist, but he always seems to keep his cool better than Ash does (in the anime), and has some honor in battle. He also shows some respect to authority figures like Nurse joy and Officer Jenny, but that's about where his good attributes end. Tell me how you feel about this. When did Paul become a multi-element? I thought he only had steel. Update soon!

    Sincerely,
    Akewataru

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  • From Akewataru on May 05, 2009
    Of course you know I love anything you write. What does it matter that the concept of human wielding Pokemon powers is not your original concept?! The true mark of a writer is how they use that concept with their own ideas. Can I, the reader, see you, the author, in the writing? Sure can. Think of it this way, just about every movie that is coming out today is the sequel or remake of a movie made years ago. Do we discredit the movie simply because someone came up with the idea earlier? So long as you give proper acknowledgement to the original writer and we can see the new author's ideas too, nope. Anyway, I like how you are including Paul into the story. I am really interested in seeing how the rematch between Ash and Paul is going to go. Update soon!!

    Sincerely,
    Akewataru
    P.S: Just Akewataru is fine. Actually, both names mean the exactly the same thing. Although, Akehanareru is more descriptive, "The darkness giving way to the light of morning" opposed to simply, "To become daylight", I personally like I go by Akewataru mostly.
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  • From Akewataru on April 20, 2009
    I am so glad that you decided to write another Pokemon fanfiction. I love your previous works, especially with the inclusion of Valdrade, Lance, and the capability of humans being able to use Pokemon powers, and still read them again and again from time to time. Please update this story soon! I want to know what happens next!
    ~Akewataru~
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  • From ANON - anon on December 01, 2008
    Unique and eyecatching, impossible to stop reading as well!
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  • From ANON - Da mist on November 28, 2008
    Great story with a very interseting idea.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on November 22, 2008
    Good chapter, lemon wasn't as good as the one in your otherstory the excellent "The Pokemon wars".
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  • From ANON - Sandz on November 13, 2008
    Great story, but when is the threesome action going to begin?
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  • From ANON - opin on November 13, 2008
    Brilliant!
    This story has limitless potential.
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on November 04, 2008
    hmmmm very interesting SSJ04 Mew... I hope you update this story soon... Is Ash the Shadow master like in the other one with Valdrade... And is his full name Ashura.. Please update soon
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