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Reviews for Smoke And Chocolate

By : beckychanmattkun
  • From ANON - Kaze on April 04, 2009
    Very interesting story. There's going to be more? I can't wait to see. God, I love the MxM pairing...and I definitely love spanking, so this is all sorts of awesome. xP
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  • From beckychanmattkun on December 10, 2008
    You and me both Matilda!

    I don't know how long we'll all have to wait. She has double shifts at college until after christmas.
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  • From DeathNoteFangirl on December 10, 2008
    Ow, poor Matt's bottom. *grin*

    I really enjoyed this and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. I think you've got a very engaging style and I did reach the end wanting to read more. :D
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  • From beckychanmattkun on December 04, 2008
    Mello: You never seem to like anything I write. Not that I care.
    But in regards to your 'another chapter' comment. It clearly states WIP. Work-In-Progress.
    My girlfriend will be writing it, as we're co-writing this chapter for chapter.

    Thanks anyway for the review.
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  • From beckychanmattkun on December 03, 2008
    YAY.
    Thank you Haya.

    -Hugs-
    ^^
    I'm glad I shoved you on here now. xD
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  • From darkdragon88 on December 03, 2008
    Ok since my review was murdered here it is again. Good Job. It was great. I loved it. It made me laugh especially this part “No. I was remembering a soppy film I watched last night.” His words dripped sarcasm which Mello met with an angry glare. That was great. Mello can be so mean to poor Matt. I feel sorry for him yet at the same time I don't. lol It's hot how Mello treats him. And I loved the NinjaMatt name. Twas very cute.
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