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Reviews for It\'s Complicated...

By : Revu
  • From Inumaru12 on September 03, 2010
    :D Wow, that was fantastic. :DDDD
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  • From ANON - ali-san on July 03, 2010
    HOLY JIZZ I LURV IT!!!!! i especially love when ash & brock have that whole passionate moment towards the end>///< ♪♪♪♪

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  • From ANON - VellaAngelik on June 28, 2010
    This was soooo amazing! You had me in tears at some points, and just wow!!!
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  • From ANON - pikachugirl2 on May 07, 2010
    Oh...My...GOD. That was truly the best fanfiction I've ever read. I almost didn't want it to stop, and in all honesty, I almost orgasmed in several parts that were so hot. You're an incredible writer, especially with these sort of things. I could feel my heart racing as fast as Ash's during the scene with the psycho. You're truly an amazing writer. I thank you for exposing my eyes to something this beautiful. You make everything seem so realistic.
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  • From ANON - Bunnybop05 on February 09, 2010
    T~T...beautiful
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  • From ANON - nessie on January 08, 2010
    this was pretty danged awesome! the perfect kind of lengthy one-shot. the gory sex part was totally cringe-worthy but what good horror DOESN'T have a moment where you want to close your eyes and look away?

    and you didn't misty-bash!
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  • From ANON - Seychelles on November 01, 2009
    I am not lying. That is easily the best Pokemon fanfiction I have ever read. I'm also really glad it wasn't short! Kudos to you my friend!
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  • From JessicaSideways on September 10, 2009
    It was a very detailed story, which is the kind that I like. Keep up the good work, there aren't many people writing pokemon yaoi erotica anymore!
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  • From Revu on July 20, 2009
    Thanks for the review!

    Since you asked a question I just wanted to drop a response in here right quick. So, no Billy wasn't the kid who Ash was with earlier on in the story as he was going in the opposite direction they were. I'm into subtleties, so Billy Klore was mentioned on the news while Brock was flipping through the channels on the TV trying to drown out Ash next door as the fifth trainer to have recently gone missing. So that was intended to signify that Ash was going to be this guy's sixth victim. I'm bad like that giving just a slight little foreshadow that things are about go horribly bad.

    Thanks for leaving a comment and enjoying the story!
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  • From on April 13, 2009
    I think that is the longest one shot i haev ever read i loved it tho
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  • From spooksies on February 27, 2009
    blood sex and gore.......my favorite combo! ;P

    laters! ~_^

    miko
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  • From dexia on January 24, 2009
    Wow, you have a great story here...

    I could have done without the psycho sex murderer part, that will now haunt my dreams for a few years...

    But it had a good ending, just that one horrifying part was my only objection...
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 06, 2008
    This fic was certainly an enjoyable read. I felt so sorry for Brock, but it all worked out in the end, so it was good. It was scary when Ash was in danger. For some reason, when Ash met that random person, I just knew he was about to get into trouble. You do a great job of writing people as creepy and frightening.
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