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Reviews for Memento

By : nikki7716
  • From ToxicPlasma on December 20, 2011
    It's a really good story. However it may be how you like writing but I have to say it is a bit annoying that you use third person. Instead of you it would of been a bit easier to read and know it was Near had you used he instead of you since you takes it to third person and puts the reader as the victim kinda not Near but other then that I like it.
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  • From arabuzumaki on September 12, 2009
    Near is such a sweetheart why did you do this to him :( this was a nice story. Mello can be such a bastard ^_^
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  • From Qiedia on April 21, 2009
    This story is so fantastic that I don't know what to say. Fantastic doesn't cover it by any means. This is insanely amazing, I'm in love with this story, even though I feel quite a bit sorry for poor, little Near. Keep up the good work!
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on December 27, 2008
    You LOST? Geez, I was insanely impressed with this one! It freaked me out yet I can see it being so true to the characters (Mello is a few straws short of blowing up on a general basis, so yeah). WELL. In my world, you win, okay? This was a way awesome little ficceh.
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  • From Evermist on December 14, 2008
    Awesome. :D Crazy!Mello-sex is always good, and you gave it a nice touch that I can't quite name.
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