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Reviews for Sorry, Hotshot

By : daisheen
  • From ANON - DarkEclipse on November 12, 2011
    This is some good stuff, in my opinion i'd like to see a Tim/Bud/Coby piece or a Bud/Coby.
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  • From dexia on November 13, 2009
    Great story and a great take on these characters, I definitely hope to see more in the future...
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  • From Scienceteacher on December 29, 2008
    Ok, you're probably wondering why we've given this story such a low rating, and so few of us even bother to read it much. Few reasons:

    #1 - Yes, it supposedly happens inside an Autobot. But heck, we have no idea what Hotshot's thinking during this, or thinking of this. He might as well be just a regular, mindless car.

    #2 - Penii sizes. A little research goes a long ways in creating some sort of feasibility. Average medically-studied length/girth of hard peni? 5 to 6 inches length and 4.85 inches circumference. Largest penus ever measured belongs to Jonah Falcon at 13.5 inches. And he and his wife report some issues in the sack because of his size. So your OCs having 15-16 inch penii - is frankly, ridiculus. I used to stand horse stallions with penii of that length...

    #3 - Don't know if you've ever actually HAD anal intercourse, but quite frankly without lubricant there will be tearing of tissue and bleeding. (even with lubricant this happens) This is one reason it is so easy for gay men to pass the HIV virus during unprotected sex. And to stick something that's 16 inches up the rectum?! You're talking major internal bleeding which would require surgery to repair. For you'd get past the Rectum and into the larg intestines at that length!

    #4 - Unless these teens get off on S&M - there's no way the receiver would feel anything but excruciating agony from intercourse.

    #5 - And finally, once again I'm not sure of your sex and/or sexual experience level.. BUT unlike women who can have orgasm after orgasm, men have a finite supply of ready sperm. So, the majority of men can ejaculate about twice (most can get hard again after first ejaculation, but not cum again for several hours) But then it will take a few hours for the testicles to 'refill' the sperm supply in order to do more. Now, this can be modified by 'training' the testicles to produce more. But that would take daily jack-off/sex sessions several times each day. This is what stallion owners do with the more popular stallions. Men are no exception...

    #6 - I won't go into the brotherXbrother thing. Not my cup-or-tea unless it's robots. But I guess others might get off on it.

    So do more research next time..
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