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Reviews for Consequences of the Maou\'s Heart

By : Shinoga
  • From priscel on January 31, 2010
    Yes! haha ^__^ it so sucks to end with a cliffie but oh well, what can one do but wait for the next chapter!

    I was surprised, at first I thought Celi was coming on to Yuuri, but she's skillful in her misdirection. Even though Yuuri's in pain, I'm sure the degree he cares for others, despite his own physical condition, will kick in and he'll immediately focus on what Celi said, Wolfie's dying. Well unless he's unconscious... but he's split persona misses nothing.

    And what's with that storm *arches brow* hmm I think, if what Celi's said is true and she chained Wolfram to Yuuri, then the storm is a backlash of power seeking Wolfram out?! yea.. long shot huh? ^_^ Sooo update soon! can't wait to read more!
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  • From LadyHoshi on January 27, 2010
    kill you? no, just keep writing! I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Vraad on January 23, 2010
    A long wait for this update but worth every minute. "Crunch" down goes Yuri! I love it!
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  • From KotoriSensei on January 18, 2010
    OMG!!! Finally! Someone who knows and isn't lock by that stupid promise to Wolf!!!! Yeah!!! Jijiji, i really love that scene, specially because the second personality's coments...XD very nice to have a WISER voice in your head...althrough that doesn't keep away the creepy part...Oh! Poor nose! She didn't have the fault of belong to someone like Yuri!
    In the other hand, Murata and Wolf...what the hell now?! T-T
    Hope to see you soon; it's getting better with each chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - priscel on December 29, 2009
    grrr... I just lost my whole review... *sighs* Anyways I'm enjoying the story and was wonder why Conrad's name is spell differently when Yuri says it? I'm at Chap 10 so far and I'm loving it! I especially loved have Yuri tripped and ended the engagement that way - it was perfect and just like something that would happen if happened in the series. ^_^ Happy Holidays ahaha and I'm still reading!
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  • From ANON - Vraad on December 05, 2009
    This story just gets better and better. I love how yuri can talk to god-mode yuri now. The impending doom on yuri, the coming battle with bandits and possibility of betral, so much suspense I love it.
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  • From KotoriSensei on December 04, 2009
    Hello! Love this chapter, specially the last part....jajajaja. Poor Yuri. He doesn't have any idea of the storm of "motherhood love-revenge" that is coming on his way...JAJAJAJA. But he deserve it, he DOES!!!!
    About wolf and the bandits...as Murata thinks, easy things or more like aparently easy thing, never end well...

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  • From Wendera on November 24, 2009
    OMG, how did you do it!? You have TWO cliffhangers in this last chapter!!! X.X That's some evil genius!!! It's been a month since the last update so I'm crossing my fingers for a new chappy soon ^o^ I feel bad for Yuuri, man. I wonder what Celi's gonna do to him, especially if he just hurt Greta on top of everything XDDD

    You've gotten me addicted to this story. I read the whole thing in two days, when I should have been working on a bunch of essays I have due XD The only aspect of the story I'm a little meh about is the Gwendal/Gunter. As much as I love yaoi, I've always been a Gwendal/Annissina kinda gal and Gunter I just can't imagine in any sort of romantic relationship whatsoever (sorry Gunter ^.^;;).

    On an unrelated-ish note, while Gwendal looks nothing like the person Takabayashi named him after, his partner Marina Anissina would totally look like Annissina anime-ized XD Creepy Cool!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on November 23, 2009
    about #22...

    Okay, what's up with the freaky dreams? What's the connection?

    ...will Yuuri get a clue, someday on what's going on?
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  • From KHurricane on October 23, 2009
    Oh my! Amazing chapter. I would want to smack you, not kill you. If you died, I wouldn't know the end. At least Yuri is getting better but Wolfram is getting number. Both do deserve a smack though. Anyways, I love the story and I really can't wait to see it all work out.
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  • From ANON - Vraad on October 21, 2009
    I waited so very long for this update and it was woefully worthwhile. So very tragic and gripping. The sense of urgency and suggestive events not completely unfolded. I hope the next chapter comes quickly.
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  • From KIKI441 on October 20, 2009
    this was great. although i would say slap yuuri because of the way he
    ended the engagement but you really can't blame him for wolfram's
    condition. me, i would blame gisela. it seems to me that keeping
    that stupid oath is more important than wolfram's life. so if it's
    anyone you are to blame it is her. i know all about the confidentiality
    of doctor and patient. but she could have given him or wolfram's some
    clue that wolfram was seriously sick.

    also, was that sick twisted thing yuuri dreamed of, was that the
    sickness inside wolfram or was that the creature that devoured the
    double blacks of that world?

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  • From KotoriSensei on October 20, 2009
    You know? I don't want to kill yuri. I mean, i some kind of relieved that aparetly he know the true now, or more like he suspects something is wrong with Wolfram. And by the way, what the hell happen in that bathroom? Did he kill Greta...he didn't right...right...RIGHT!!!! T-T OMG, i think i'm gona died od desesperation until you publish your next chapter...
    Anyway, mu conclusion. they are ALL and idiots. Yuri for his stupid idea of "gay couples don't work", Wolf for his pride, Murata and the others that know...for not saying anything...Wolf's brother for not notice that their little brother is about to die....and more other things...so as i said; that castle is full os idiotic people. Just make them a little more inteligent in the next chapters, so ia can have my happy ending...jijijiji
    See ya!!!
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  • From KHurricane on September 23, 2009
    You made my day! I wasn't expecting anything to be updated but your story was. And it was amazing! Really frickin funny! Poor Yuuri...ugh! So not going to be fun for him. Anyways, I loved it and I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - jishe on August 28, 2009
    Hello! New chapter! It was a long waiting, but wasn't in vain.
    Long and variated chapter, i like it.
    I found quite funny that 1) every body knows of Gunter an Gwen....and 2) Greta is a yaoi-fan like me!!! Jajajajajjajajajajja!!! One point for she and Yuri's mom!!! Besides the point of yaoi and all it's crazy and lovely histories, i really don't see what's the problem of two men been together or married...or 2 women if that's the case (but i don't like yuri). It's just silly.
    To bad we didn't get the chance of reading Wolfram and his party...i wonder how is he...? T-T I hope, just standing.
    And the laste part...god that was scary...what is cecile plannig...? If a were Yuri..i'll run to the end of the word or just go to the Earth...she is plannig something bad...you can tell....
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